MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN

Jab subha ki chaadar kheitoN par kirnoN ki baarish karti hey
meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN
ye jitney chottey podey heiN inhey kis ney ugna sikhaaya hey
ye jo nanhey nanhey panchi heiN inhey urrna kesey aaya hey
ye kon subha hi ambar ko neeley rang sey rang deta hey
subha subha sab baaghon ko in phooloN sey bhar deta hey
titli ke naazuk pankhoN ko rangoN sey kon sajaata hey
kon kalyoN ke daaman ko khushbuoN sey bhar jaata hey
ye kon hey jis ko phaloN ke ooper khaol charrhaana aata hey
ye kon hey jis ko beej ke andar darakht chupaana aata hey
kon behar sey ley kar paani abar ke ghar pohanchaata hey
phir usi abar sey keh kar baarish jagaa jagaa barsaata hey
kon fiza ki band mutthi meiN hawaa ke jhonkey rakhta hey
ye kon samandar ke paani ko saahil pe rokey rakhta hey
kon kahaN sey shaam dhaley hi chaand ko dhoond ke laata hey
har raat ambar ki basti meiN taaroN ke deep jalaata hey
har pal ragoN ki sarrkoN par kon lahu daorrata hey
aaNkhoN ke korey kaaghaz par tasveereiN kon banaata hey
jab subha ki chaadar kheitoN par kirnoN ki baarish karti hey
meiN aksar sochney lagta hooN…!

By: Amal

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Amal, Superb!

Buhat sada magar bayhad dilkash... buhat din baad sho'ar-e-gupshup main achi chiz perdhnay ko milli hay, jeetay rahiyee!

Khuda aisay ehsas ka naam hay
rahay samnaay aur dikhayee na day!

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN…

waqei ye sab baatein tou aksar sochney waali heiN…lekin aaj kal tou sochna chaahiye har roz khi mein kon pistole sey goliyan marwata hey har roz markitin mein bomb kon parhwata hey:bummer:

Very nice poem Amal, i thought aap koi ghazal post karein gey:-d..thanks for sharing

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Jigar Amal Bhai.....Khushbash,

Sawan Ki Sabeeh Subh Jaisi, Komal Sheetal Nazm....Zindabaad.

Darwesh.

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

when the dawn fills the fields
with the sun's rays as if they were
raining down everywhere,
I often get to thinking -
who taught the little plants to grow
who taught the tiny birds to fly
who fills the sky with blue colors
who fills the garden with flowers early in the morning
who adorns the butterflies' wings
with so many enchanting colors
who fills with fragrance the beds of flowers
and who is he who....

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Nice...

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Nicely written Amal, and nice translation rKopra!!

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Asif2000, you're welcome.

Amal, does my translation accurately portray your poem ? Would you like any revision of the translation?

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Simply superb Amal

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN…

Pasandeedgi ke leeye sab dostoN ka be’had shukriya :flower1::slight_smile:

rkopra, you have done a superb job :k: Thanx a lot man :slight_smile:

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

v nice amal bhae:)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

kam soocha karaN Aymal :p
nice poem u know am not nazam person :)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

I know, hum aap ko sudhaar nahi sakey ;)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

beautifull Amal jee aap waqai main acha lekhtey ho nice i like this

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Shukriya Tahreem :)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Beautiful Yet Very Simple...

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just speechless
its superb
awesome
gr8
keep sharing amal

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Thanx a lot redidentity and deadsoul. So nice of you guys :)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Chalo doobara parh li hey....... kuch neya bhi post kareiN:~)

Re: MeiN aksar sochney lagta hooN...

Sochty hain tu khusurat shairi takhleeq pati hy na:)