Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

AQ · September 7, 2007, 2:00am

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DekhtaY rahai chaaNd saY baadal kee AThkheliyaaN
Waqt-e-Firaaq bhee taaraY jagmagaye thaY raat bhar

"Anwaar"

AQ · September 7, 2007, 2:01am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

jisey khatra ho haathoN ki chatri aandhi ko rok na paey gi
wo waqt ki teiz hawaaoN meiN phir deep jalaata hi kiuN hey!

"Amal"

AQ · September 7, 2007, 2:01am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

jo mera aur tumhaara waqt guzraa hasnay ronay maiN
ussay poori tarha se tum bhula dau phir challay jana

AQ · September 7, 2007, 2:02am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

Ho gayee subha-e-Firaaq tau yeh yaad aayaa
Waqt kee naheeN yeh mijaal kay woh Thehray

"Anwaar Qureshi"

Shumaisa · September 7, 2007, 6:03am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

Taire firaaq key LAMHON mein dill ney sochaa
taire wisaal k LAMHE kitne mukhtaser thehre

AQ · September 7, 2007, 6:36am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

^
I see a very very huge resemblence in the sher I posted and this one… Not much curious about the “Zameen” but the wordings… I mean it feels as if it was written as an answer to my sher…

Is it yours :aq:??

Shumaisa · September 7, 2007, 6:40am

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Nahinn.. :p

Aik LAMHA saad` zindagi mein aata hai zaroor
jab chupana bhi nahin kuch aur kehna b nahin

AQ · September 7, 2007, 6:42am

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your answer was incomplete :) please, answer me completely......

abeeha · September 7, 2007, 12:20pm

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Shab e firaq kisi roz dhal hi jae gi
khuda se har gharri manga karon visaal us ka

Shumaisa · September 7, 2007, 12:25pm

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nail biting

Barray bhaiya aise muskura k bachon ko harasaan to na kiya karro..

main ne koii jawabi karwayii nahin kii thi ye ittifaq hai …pehle dhiyan nahin diya tha, jab aap ne kaha tou notice kiya dono shair mein kaafi resemblence hai.. andaaz-e-bayan alag hai magar meaning same hai..

Basss..jaan bakhshii huii ? ya main aap k aanay tak yaheen kaan pakkar k kharri rahon..

abeeha · September 7, 2007, 12:43pm

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

ab kia bacha tha pas apne jo chura k le gaya
fakat chand lamhe hi to the meeras apni

-ye-

Shumaisa · September 7, 2007, 1:05pm

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Ye..? :p

Bicharrte WAQT kissi se hamain tha yehi gumaan
key zakham kaisa bhi ho umrr bhar nahin rehtaa..

WiseGuy · September 10, 2007, 3:20pm

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

Bhula baiThay ho humko Aaj lekin yeh samaJH lena
Bohat paCHtaao gay, jis waqt hum kal yaad aaiN gay

Shumaisa · September 11, 2007, 11:21am

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Main ne kehta tha WAQT zalim haii
daikh lo khvab ho gaye tum bhiii !!

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 2:41am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

jo is k chahray pe rang-e-haya thehar jaa'ey
tu saans waqat samandar hawa thehar jaa'ey

Koyal · September 12, 2007, 2:44am

Re: Mehfil-e-Unwaan — Waqt/Gharri/Lamhey

**abhi wo dard baqi hai agar chey *waqt* marham hai** **magar kuch *waqt *lagta hai kisi ko bhool janey mein**

mariam · September 12, 2007, 5:47pm

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nice

mariam · September 12, 2007, 5:48pm

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aahaa

Precious_Khan · September 14, 2007, 10:49am

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Aik Bhi Aansoo Na Nikla Waqt Par
Ait'Baar e Chashm e Purnam Kiya Karain

Precious_Khan · September 14, 2007, 10:54am

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Bay Waqt Nikal Aatay Hain Aankhoon Say Aansoo
Ho jo Ronay Ka Hungama Tou Aksar Nahiee'n Rotay
Kohsaroo'n K Dil Pighlay Tou Darya Hovay Jaari
Aur Log Yeh Kahtay Hain K Pat'thar Nahee'n Rotay