Mehfil-e-Mushairah

Asalam-u-Alaikum !

Yeh mehfil-e-mushairah is liye muaqid kia jaa raha hai ke aap sab log apni aik

pasandeeda ghazal/nazm hamare sath share karein aur hamein batayen ke

woh ghazal/nazm apko kion pasand hai aur aap ne kab parhi ! I hope aap log

is mehfil mein shirkat kar ke is mehfil ko rang-a-rang nazmon/ghazlon se saja

dein ge ! So everyone is invited specially adminz/cmz/modz/memberz !

Shukriya !

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dont know the name of the poet but these 3 shair that I posted in my blog more than a year ago, and know them from last 15 years ...

Tum eisa kerna kay koo'ee jugnoo, ko'ee sitaraa sambhaal rukhnaa
Meray andheroN kee fikr choRo, tum apnay ghar kaa khyaal rukhnaa

Udaas mausam, UjaaR dhartee main, fasl bo'ee thee, chandni kee
ub us maiN ugnay lagay andheray to jee may kaisaa malaal rukhnaa

wo rasm-o-raah hee nahee rahay jub, to naamay kis kaam kay tumhaaray
udhar say guzraa, kabhee to looN gaa, meray khatoN ko nikaal rukhna

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Appended ghazal is one of my favourite due to sadness in its lyrics. I read it in 2005 first time. Last shair of the ghazal is soul of it.

pareshaan raat saarii hai sitaaro tum to so jaao
sukuut-e-marg taari hai sitaaro tum to so jaao

hanso aur hansate-hansate doobate jaao Khalaaon mein
hamen ye raat bhaari hai sitaaro tum to so jaao

tumhen kyaa aaj bhi koi agar milane nahi aayaa
ye baazi ham ne haari hai sitaaro tum to so jaao

kahe jaate ho ro-roke hamaaraa haal duniyaa se
ye kaisi raazadaari hai sitaaro tum to so jaa

hamen to aaj ki shab pau phate tak jaaganaa hogaa
yahi qismat hamaari hai sitaaro tum to so jaao

hamen bhi neend aa jaayegi ham bhi so hi jaayenge
abhi kuch beqaraari hai sitaaro tum to so jaao

:salam:
TLK m so glad that u hv posted these ashaar i hope u vl like the whole ghazal too :slight_smile:
So Here You Go

Tum Aisa Karna Keh Koi Jugnu Koi Sitara Sambhaal Rakhna
Mere Andhero’n Ki Fikar Choro Bas Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna

Ujaar Mosam Mein Rait Dharti Pe Fasal Boi Thi Chaandni Ki
Ab Is Mein Ugnay Lagay Andhere To Kaisa Jee Mein Malaal Rakhna

Diyaar-e-Ulfat Mein Ajnabi Ko Safar hai Darpesh Zulmato’n
Kahi’n Woh Raahon Mein Kho Na Jaaye Zara Darechay Ujaal Rakhna

Wo Rasm-o-Raah He Nahi’n Rahe Jab To Naamay Kis Kaam Ke Tumhare
Udhar Se Guzraa Kabhi To LooN Ga Mere Khato’N Ko Nikaal Rakhna

Bicharne Wale Ne Waqt-e-Rukhsat Kuch Is Nazar Se Palat Ke Dekha
Keh Jaise Woh Bhi Yeh Keh Raha Ho Tum Apne Ghar Ka Khayal Rakhna

Yeh Dhoop Chaao’n Ka Khel Hai Ya Khizaa’n Bahaaro’n Ki Ghaat Mein Hai
Naseeb-e-Subh Ujrooj Ho To Nazar Mein Shaam-e-Zawaal Rakhna

Kisay Khabar Thi Keh Kab Ye Mosam Uraa Ke Rakh De Ga Khaak “Aazar”
Tum Ehtiyatan Zamee’n Ke Sar Pe Falak Ki Chaadar Bhi Daal Rakhna

Aezaaz Ahmed Aazar

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wah wah yaar .. wah wah .. aap ne to dil khush kar diyaa .. not only you psoted the whole ghazal, you even told me who the Poet is ...

Shukriya TLK m glad dat u r happy to read ma reply :)

I don't remember where I got it from and who wrote it but with my other nick, Evilmastermind, I posted it once and would like to share it again - b/c it kinda xplains what I want sometimes in life...

*Yeh zara zara si baat par tarha tarha kay azaab Q *
** Jo kisi se bhi khafa na ho, mujhe uss khuda ki talaash hai **

** Mujhe laghzishon peh harr ghari koi tok-ta hai baar baar **
** Jisey kar ke dil ko dukh na ho, mujhe uss gunaah ki talaash hai **

** Main dhoondta hoon woh khizaan jisey gulshanon se pyaar ho **
** Jisey kisi charaagh se na bair ho, mujhe uss hawaa ki talaash hai **

** Mujhe uss nagar ki hai justuju jahan koi bhi chahata nahi lahoo **
** Jahan hirann ko sher se darr na ho mujhe uss jagah ki talaash hai **

** Yahan ik lamhey ke parraao mein mere saare phool jhulas gaye **
** Ab jahan talkhiyon ki tapish na ho, mujhe uss fiza ki talaash hai **

** Bina humsafar ke kab talak koi musafiton mein laga rahe **
** Jahan koi kisi se juda na ho, mujhe uss raah ki talaash hai **

** Mujhe dekh kar jo ik nazar mere saare dard samajh sakey **
** Jo iss Qadar ho chara-gar, mujhe uss nigaah ki talaash hai**

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thankx 4 sharing

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very nice guys

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**rukhsat hoa to meri baat maan ker geya
jo us k paas tha woh mujhay daan ker geya

bichra kuch is ada sey k rut he badal gai
woh ek shakhs saray sheher ko wweraan ker gwya

dil chusp waqiya hai k kal ek aziz dost
apne mufaad per mujhay qurbaan ker geya

kitni sudher gai hai judai main zindagi
haan woh jafa se to mujh per ehsaan ker gaya

AZHAR mai baat baat per kehta tha jisko jaan
woh shakhs aakhir mujhe ba-jaan ker geya**

i like it don't know why :) i love second shair of it :)

Lois in Poetry forum ghush khaa ke giring

qiyamat kee nishaaniyaan hain

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^ aap ki ibtilah kay lye arz hai, I used to post here alot back in the days :snooty:

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Meri Ibtilah ke liye :konfused:

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how u say, for your kind info in urdu? :hmmm:

jab umar ki naqdi khatam hui by ibn-e-insha

ab umar ki naqdi khatam hui
ab hum ko udhaar ki haajat hai
hai koi jo sahokaar bane?
hai koi jo dewan haar bane?
kuch saal maheene din logon!
par sood biyaj ke bin logo!
haan apni jaan ke khazane se
haan umer ke tosha-e-khane se
kya koi bhi sahokaar nahi?
kya koi bhi dewan haar nahi?

jab naam udhaar ka aaya hai
kyun sab ne sar ko jhukaya hai
kuch kaam hamen niptaane hain
jinhen janne waale jane hain
kuch pyar dulaar ke dhande hain
kuch jag ke doosre phande hain

hum mangte nahi hazar baras
dus paanch baras do chaar baras
haan sood boyahj bhi de leen ge
haan aur khiraaj bhi de leen ge
asaan bane dushwaar bane
par koi to dewan haar bane

tum kon tumhara naam hai kya?
kuch hum se tum ko kaam hai kya?
kyun is majme me aaye ho?
kuch maangti ho?kuch laye ho?
teh kaarobaar ki bateen hain
yeh naqad udhaar ki bateen hain
hum bethain hain kashkool liye
sab umar ki naqdi khatam kiye
gar shair ke rishte aaye ho
tab samjho jald judai ho

ab geet gaya sangeet gaya
haan shair ka mousam beet gaya
ab patjhar aye paat giren
kuch subha giren kuch raat giren
yeh apne yaar purane hain
ik umer se hum ko jaane hain
in sab ke paas hai maal bohat
haan!umer ke maah-o-saal bohat
in sab ko hum ne bulaya hai
aur jholi ko phelaya hai
tum jao in se baat karen
hum tum se na mulaqaat karen

kya paanch baras?
kya umer ke apne paanch baras?
tum jaan ke thele laye ho?
kya pagal ho soodai ho?
jab umer ka aakhir aata hi
har din sadiyaan ban jata hai

jeene ki hawis hi nirali hai
hai koun jo is se khaali hai
kya mout se pehle marna hai?
tum ko to bohat kuch karna hai
phir tum ho hamari koun bhala
haan tum se ham

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Good choice everyone i must say brilliant :bb:

btw baaki log kahan gayab hain ?

Asalam u Alaikum !

Yuun jo takataa hai aasamaan ko tuu
Koii rahataa hai aasamaan mein kyaa

Ye mujhe chain kion nahi'n partaa
Ik he shaKhs thaa jahaan mein kyaa

yaar thaa gulzaar thaa baad-e-sabaa thii main na thaa
laayaq-e-paa-bos-e-jaaN kyaa hinaa thii main na thaa

Yeh aarzuu he rahii koii aarzuu karte
Khud apnii aag mein jalate jigar lahuu karte

Tere jamaal kaa paratau nigaah me.n hotaa
Kabhii sabaa se kabhii gul se guftaguu karate

Tere Khayaal mein gum hoke ek Ghazal kehte
Aur us Ghazal ko na rusvaa kuu-ba-kuu karate

Ham ahal-e-dil ko bohat thaa ye nashshaa-e-Ggam bhi
Usii sharaab se raushan subuu-subuu karate

Ye ehataraam-e-junuu'n hai ki sii liyaa daaman
Vagarnaa ek tamaashaa-saa kuu-ba-kuu karte

Hamein yaqeen hai ki gar tuu qariib bhii hota
To duur jaake kahii'n terii justajuu karte

(Himayat Ali Shayar)

bEing lonEly !!! SiD !!!