jiia
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LP
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
Last line kya hai?
jiia
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
o! kaaba dil dhanay waly:cheer:butkhana hun to tera hun
LP
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
Meaning?
jiia
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
ALLAH kaha rehty hein ?
dil meeeee to ALLAH ka gher konsa hua ???dilllll
to dil to usne tor dia 
ab bacha but khana to
vahan rakhy sary but kis k hui usi k
to but khana kiska hua 
Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
My counter poem, I hope you guys will like :)**
Mujhy hosh main justaju jiski hai meri madhoshi tu bus uski hai
Meri sanson main mehakti jo rahti hai kia yeh khushbu uski hai
Kho sa gya hon is dunya main neendon ny bhi phir moon phaira
Mujhy yeh din yeh raat sab tab chahiya jab in main hansi uski hai
Main be lafz howa be shabd howa be zulf howa be had howa
Meri sochon ki is junbish main yeh tasveer bani kia uski hai
Mery hathon ki in lakeeron main kion banta nahi us ka chehra
Zindagi apni mujhy kion lagti parai kia yeh zindagi bhi ab uski hai
**- StrangeWorld
LP
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
You write well :k:
LP
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
You write well :k:
jiia
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
very nice

plz post it in shaoari gupshup
Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
Thanks LP!
Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
Thanks jiia! I'm glad you liked.
jiia
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
u r :welocome: in poetry
for yr own talent :k:
Sho’ra-e-Gupshup
Diva
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Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn
LAst misra is ..uff!