me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn

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Last line kya hai?

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o! kaaba dil dhanay waly:cheer:butkhana hun to tera hun

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Meaning?

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ALLAH kaha rehty hein ?:blush:
dil meeeee to ALLAH ka gher konsa hua ???dilllll

to dil to usne tor dia :teary1:
ab bacha but khana to
vahan rakhy sary but kis k hui usi k
to but khana kiska hua :hypo:

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My counter poem, I hope you guys will like :)**

Mujhy hosh main justaju jiski hai meri madhoshi tu bus uski hai
Meri sanson main mehakti jo rahti hai kia yeh khushbu uski hai

Kho sa gya hon is dunya main neendon ny bhi phir moon phaira
Mujhy yeh din yeh raat sab tab chahiya jab in main hansi uski hai

Main be lafz howa be shabd howa be zulf howa be had howa
Meri sochon ki is junbish main yeh tasveer bani kia uski hai

Mery hathon ki in lakeeron main kion banta nahi us ka chehra
Zindagi apni mujhy kion lagti parai kia yeh zindagi bhi ab uski hai

**- StrangeWorld

Re: me hosh me hn to tera hn dewana hn to tera hn

You write well :k:

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You write well :k:

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very nice :clap: :clap:

plz post it in shaoari gupshup

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Thanks LP!

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Thanks jiia! I'm glad you liked.

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u r :welocome: in poetry
for yr own talent :k:

Sho’ra-e-Gupshup

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LAst misra is ..uff!