mayn zinda hoon !!!

****Jab dard puranay ho baithay..
Jab yaad ka jugnuraakh hua
Jab aankh main aaansoo barf huay
Jab zakhm se dil manoos hua
Jab tees ko chubhna bhool gia
Tab mujh peh khula main zinda hun!!!
Phir dil ko dharhakna yaad aya!!!

Jab karb ki lambi rahon main
Ahsas k baal safaid huay
Ya soch ki sarma dhoopon main
Alaam ka mevah khushk hua
Jab aankhain 'be sailaab’huin
Jab neendain Aandhi ho baithin
Jab khawabain b ‘be khawab’ huin
Jab chaand charha be dardi ka
jab tanhaii ka seena b
Ser rakhnay ki aagosh laga
Jab rait peh likhi yaadon ko
Be mehr hawa ne cheen lia
Jab hosh ki kachi dewarain
Tasweeron se azad huin
Jab ‘yaad ruttain’ be dad huin
Tab mujh peh khula main zinda hun!!!
Phir dil ko dharakna yaad aya!!!

Tab aankhain kuch abaad huin
Jab mujh peh khula main zinda huun…
Ahsas ka bachpan jaag para
Phir jazbay be taqweem huay!!
Phir waqt ne kuch angrhaii li..
Phir soch ki qabar se dhool urhi
Phir piyas ka barzakh bhool gya!
Ik hijr se kia azad huay?
So hijr naye ejaad huay!!
Phir ik nazar siyyad bani
Ik nazar ka taair said hua
Phir ashk main darya qaid hua!!
Phir dharkan main bhonchal paray
Phir ishq ka jogi gallion main…
Taqdeer kay saamp utha laya!!

Phir hosh ka jungle sabz hua
Phir shoq_e_darinda jag utha..
Phir zulf ka tewar shaam banay
Us shaam main phir mehtaab charha
Phir hont ki larzish, geet bani..
Phir sans ka naam saba thehra!!
Phir sher,shaur ka wird hua..
Phir zanjeerain,zawer thehrin..
Phir taqreerain inaam huin
Phir khoon se likhay jazbon ki
Kuch tehreerain neelam huin!!
Phir dard "Zulaikhaan"ban baitha..
Phir qurb ka karb jawan hua
Phir mujh pe khula main zinda huun!!!

Kuch wasl shabain shab khaizhuin
Kuch hijr ki nabzain tez huin
Jab qaid ko taza umr mili..
Us qaidi umr k bakhton ne..
Ik shaam_e-sahuur se pooch lia
Mehjuur hi rehna tha…to hamain
wo pichla hijr hi kafi tha!!
Gar qaid hi ja` apnani thi..
Kiun pichlay jaal ko chora tha??
Kis ahed peh pinjra tora tha??
Jab jaal teri qamzori thay…
Siyyad ko kiun badnaam kia??
Ik soch raha huun muddat se …
Kiun mujh pe khula main zinda huun ???
KIun dil ko dharakna yaad aya ???**
**

now when you have read it can you please tell me the poet name ?? and if possible can anyone find a Urdu version of this poem ??? Please!!! :frowning:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

Beautiful… maza aa gaya :k: kahan se maari? :stuck_out_tongue: sorry yaar mae ne tu first time parhii haii ye poem dunno who is the poet! :frowning:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

**BOhat achi hay **
**try to find both urdu version and poet name **
**but after tuesday **

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

Wow beautiful nazm, maybe its by AIA , i have no idea, just guess
thanks for sharing:k: :slight_smile:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

Zabardast :k:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

bohat hoob:k:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

thank you everyone. It is a beautiful piece of work!

heartuuu: You're no good :( Net pay say uraye =P

IS: Thanku thanku. I'll wait !!

Gul: I thought so too. Let's see.

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

jis ki bhi hai bohat achi hai
thanks for sharing with us ghazal :-)

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

bhut zabardast :k:

kho gya tha mai tou iss mai…

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

bohat khobsorat hai.

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

Very nice :))

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

thank you everyone :)

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

its simply awesome!!!!!!

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

bohat khoob thanks for sharing...

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

I cannot describe its beauty in words. It’s marvellous! :lajawab:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

thank you thank you everyone.

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

:rolleyes:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

^ a very nice way to welcome back someone who you told on em es en to come to poetry more often :rolleyes:

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

Splended Choice...........:)

Re: mayn zinda hoon !!!

**Where is my thanks :naraz: *u know k kiss baat ka thanks :snooty: ***



PS:- Welcome back to Poetry Section :stuck_out_tongue: