.......May agar may nahi hota toa aur kia hota !

its in connection wid an old writing of mine titiled:

…May agar may nahi hota toa aur kia hota !

May Agar may nahi hota toa mUssawir hota
teri hansi k her aik rung say sajata canvas
teri haya k takhayul say churata may naqoosh
rubt bay rub lakrron ko sajata jata
May teray hussan ka shahkaar banata jaata

May agar may nahi hota toa sitara hota
may falak per bhee teray hussan ka churcha kerta
Chand ko jub bhee teray hussan say hoti jo jalan
may timtima k tujhay iss kee bhee khabar deta
yeh khabar sun k jub too khilkhila k huns pertee
may teray qadmoN may rehnaykee arzoo kerta

…May agar may nahi hota toa aur kia hota !

Re: .......May agar may nahi hota toa aur kia hota !

I would like to read the old writing as well if possible. I think it will sound better. It seems incomplete but i like the first para.

Re: …May agar may nahi hota toa aur kia hota !

adshukariya …rest of the poem is on the following link :

http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=159060