**Third edition of Match-it.
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A few things to remember:
• As usual, here in Sho’ra-e-Gupshup, your contribution must be your very own creation.
• You can post only one sheir. So think thrice before you type it out.
• Do not post complete ghazal or nazm.
• This competition will expire in one week and a winner will be announced.
• Picture will change with every new compeition.
• Make it a nice presentation. Make your sheir bold, change color, italics, center or something or anything more nice-looking
PS: For suggestions, please PM either me or NikamiJano, no suggestion here please. You can also suggest us a picture to be used for future Match-It competitions.
There were again so many of beautifull aashaar posted, but again — it has to be only one. According to my humble understanding,Shahana’s sheir describes the picture best. So guys, give Shahana a big hand for lovely creation Congrats Shahana
Waise mujhe to kaheen khat jalta hua nazar nahi aaya tasveer mein.
BUT
Aap ne decide kia hai to kuch soch kar hi kia hoga.
Agar tasveer se hatt kar main dekhoon to sab se ache do she'r hain (even mere she'r se bhi laakh darje ache), or wo hain Shahana G ka or MirAbbas G ka.
Shahana G! Mubaarkaan honn tuhaanu. Tusi chha gaye o ! She'r waaqaee akheer a. Edhe te ghazal ho jaye....ki kheyaal a ?
congrats shahana ji ... u write beautifully as we all know.
But nikamijano ji, I disagree with your decision in this case ... mirabbas's sher was clearly more suited to the pic posted (as was zamils) and captured the pathos portrayed in the image with greater skill then shahana ji's (no offense meant shahana) or zamil's (no offense bhai jaan).
umm... well congrats to shahana gee.. but i disagree... i think the more suited and the one that really depicted the image was zamilz... itz supposed to be depicting the image eh? ...
Agar tasveer se hatt kar main dekhoon to sab se ache do she'r hain (even mere she'r se bhi laakh darje ache), or wo hain Shahana G ka or MirAbbas G ka.
Shahana G! Mubaarkaan honn tuhaanu. Tusi chha gaye o ! She'r waaqaee akheer a. Edhe te ghazal ho jaye....ki kheyaal a ?
i agree ur sher is nice one but agar dekha jaiey tu ap k sher main b like gesoo kahin bikhray nazar nahi atey aur ap ka sher more female pe jata...aur pic male ki hai....and i thought k har aik ko yahan pe encourage kia jaiey is leay.. dekha jaey tu kafi haad taak shahana ka sher match hota.... i agree k ap ko jala huwa khat nazar nahi aya..lakin agar ap poetry ko ghor se parnay ki bajiay un lafzon per ghor karen tu ap ko shaied kahiN jalan ka ahsaas ho ... aur raha mirabas k sher ka sawal tu un k sher main tu kahin khat ka zikar he nahi... totally match he nahi hota us ka sher...i guess ab ap ko samj main baat a gaye ho gaye...:)
N J ! (no offence plz)
Aap ka judge karne ka style Amal se different hai. Wo ehsaas ko nahi dekhte wo sirf tasveer se match karte hain.
Aur agar jalne ka ehsaas ho sakta hai to MirAbbas k she’r mein bhi qatl kikhabar ba-zariya khat ka ehsaas bhi ho sakta hai aur bikhre gesuon ko haath se samettne ka bhi. Aur mujhe hairat hai k aap apni hi “community” ko nahi pehchaan sakeen. Us k features dekhiye, lipstick dekhiye. Kya wo male hai !!!
Khair behes ka koi faaida nahi. Its done and its done. Ab jo bhi faisla hua kare ga meri taraf se koi aitraaz nahi aaye ga. Its ur job n u know ur job better than me:). Mera problem ye hai k mujhe jo feel hota hai main keh deta hoon so plzzzzz don’t mind.
Congrats 
Shahana 
