Mast nazroon say dekh lay na tha
Gar tamna thee azmanay kee
Hum tu maadhosh yoon he ho jatay
Kiya zaroorat thee muskuranay kee
No body commented on my post this means i am not up to standards.... i will be careful now...
nahi acha hay
p.s.
dilsay zara phir say ja kar daikh aao, uss say achi aankhain to chuk shezaad ki bhainsson ki hain :( , hud hoti hay bad zooqi ki bhi
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*Originally posted by Azad: *
nahi acha hay
p.s.
dilsay zara phir say ja kar daikh aao, uss say achi aankhain to chuk shezaad ki bhainsson ki hain :( , hud hoti hay bad zooqi ki bhi
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Thanks Azad jee it is ok i got the msg so i will be careful... no more postings from me just comments on the postings.... this way it will be batter... :)
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Originally posted by Dilsay: *
**Mast nazroon say dekh lay na tha
Gar tamna thee azmanay kee
Hum tu maadhosh yoon he ho jatay
Kiya zaroorat thee muskuranay kee*
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Lovely... Dilsay maine abhi dekhi hai aapki post....Its really beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Thanks Azad jee it is ok i got the msg so i will be careful... no more postings from me just comments on the postings.... this way it will be batter... :)
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i am not talking about ur postings ........ be honest kia chuk shezaad ki bhainsson ki aankhain khobsorat nahi hain????
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*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Lovely... Dilsay maine abhi dekhi hai aapki post....Its really beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..
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Thanks for your comments.... but time has passed... as i said i will be replying the posts now on....
And you are one of the best contributors please keep it up....
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come on:(
u’ll be posting ur collection or ur own:)
i apologise from Azad:)
ur contribution is awesome.yeh johte tareef nahi hai,haqeqat hai:)
plz keep posting:flower1:
wah..buhat khoob! :k:
dilsay bhaii...yaar aap tu dil pe hi le gae...ham tu aate hi aap kii wajah se hain! aap ne contribute kernaa chor diya tu ham bhi comment kerna chor dain ge.. :(
wah bahut khoob!
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you dont have to applogise on any ones behalf unless and untill you are involved… well i dont think i will pe posting any thing just comments…
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
you dont have to applogise on any ones behalf unless and untill you are involved... well i dont think i will pe posting any thing just comments...
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Dilsay aap bakhoobi Vakif hain Azad sahab kay commnets say... inhain tu Vivacious ki post ki hue nazm bhi pasand nahi aae... jo ke vaqae lajavab the... please do contribute your efforts in future as well...we want to read poetry.. and thats the truth...
Dilsay... please mazak main kisi ka dil nahi dukhatay... aainda khayal rakhye ga... Thanks..
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
you dont have to applogise on any ones behalf unless and untill you are involved... well i dont think i will pe posting any thing just comments...
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ok as u wish:(
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*Originally posted by P}{ä®mä©Ï§t: *
Dilsay aap bakhoobi Vakif hain Azad sahab kay commnets say... inhain tu Vivacious ki post ki hue nazm bhi pasand nahi aae... jo ke vaqae lajavab the... please do contribute your efforts in future as well...we want to read poetry.. and thats the truth...
Dilsay... please mazak main kisi ka dil nahi dukhatay... aainda khayal rakhye ga... Thanks..
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Mainay kisi ka dil dukhanay kee baat nahi kee... and it was not regarding Azad when i posted this entire day no body commented that is what made me not to post anything because i thought that ppls did not like what i was writing.... Well
Dil ko dilsay samjaha raha hoon
Man giya tu bhool jaoon ga main behi
by Dilsay
thts great :k::k:
bohat khoobsurut hai.. 
Thanx 4 sharing
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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Mainay kisi ka dil dukhanay kee baat nahi kee... and it was not regarding Azad when i posted this entire day no body commented that is what made me not to post anything because i thought that ppls did not like what i was writing.... Well
Dil ko dilsay samjaha raha hoon
Man giya tu bhool jaoon ga main behi
by Dilsay
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aray bhai dilsay Pharma Begum ko waisay hi Azad ke khwab atay hain, mouft ke jo hain, jab in ki aynak mil jay gii to phir kahay gii daraw'nay khwab aatay hain :)
acha shair hai dilse, itni jaldi baadguman nahin hwa kartai:)
Or main to yahan thi hi nahin na, kasai reply karti?
Please keep posting :)
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*Originally posted by Swera: *
acha shair hai dilse, itni jaldi baadguman nahin hwa kartai:)
Or main to yahan thi hi nahin na, kasai reply karti?
Please keep posting :)
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na to doray hum dalain our reply dilsay ko milay .... qayamat ki nishani hay qoya
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*Originally posted by Azad: *
na to doray hum dalain our reply dilsay ko milay .... qayamat ki nishani hay qoya
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Ap kooch lik kar to dikain :p