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I think Nasir kazmi used his name quite well in maqtaa:
aao kuch der ro hi len Nasir
phir ye darya utar na jae kahin
aur
beth kar saya e gul main Nasir
hum boht roye wo jab yaad aaya
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to yehi wo shair hai jiss main Parveen ne apna naam use kia hai?
han ji
aahang ke jamal me ENJEEL ki dua
narmi me SORAEY REHMAN ki tara
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I like mohsin naqvi's maqtas. pata nahi ooski baqi sari ghazal halki hoti hai es leay oos k maqta wazni lagta hai.
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I think, from male poets Iqbal is the only poet who hardly used takahllus. maybe he knew that he will be recognized by his poetry either way, whether he use takhallus or not.
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Habib jalib's famous maqta;
ChoRnaa Ghar kaa hameN yaad hai Jaalib, naheeN bhoolay
thaa watan zehan meiN apnay koi zindaaN tou naheeN thaa....
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I think, from male poets Iqbal is the only poet who hardly used takahllus. maybe he knew that he will be recognized by his poetry either way, whether he use takhallus or not.
even Faiz uses takhallus rarely. Same is the case with Mohsin Naqvi, Munir Niazi and as mentioned in OP with Amjad Islam Amjad as well.
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hum kahaN key daana thay, kis hunar meiN yaktaa thay
be-sabab huaa Ghalib dushman aasmaan apnaa
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be-dard sunti ho to chal, kehta hai kia achi ghazal
aashiq ters, riswa tera,shayir tera, Insha tera
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urdu hai jiss kaa naam humeeN jaantey heiN daagh
saarey jahaaN meiN dhoom hamraai zubaaN ki hai
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kaifiyat-e-chashm uss ki mujhe yaad hai** sauda**
saaghar kou mirey haath sey lena key chalaa meiN
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Jab khizan aye gi to laut aye g wo bhi "Faraz"
wo baharon mein zara kam he nikla karta hai
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Haif Us Chaar Girah Kapre Ki Qismat Ghalib
Jis Ki Qismat Main Ho Ashiq Ka Greeban Hona
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ye masail e tasawwuf ye tera bayan ghalib
tujhe ham wali samajhte jo na bada khowar hota
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even Faiz uses takhallus rarely. Same is the case with Mohsin Naqvi, Munir Niazi and as mentioned in OP with Amjad Islam Amjad as well.
Mohsin Naqvi?
I cannot find any of his ghazals without takhallus. two books, taloo e ashq and Azab e deed are for example.
munir also used takhallus a lot as you can see his popular shairs are with takhallus.
Yeah Amjad Islam has a different style.
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**Pathar Bana Dia Mujahy Rone Nahi diya
Damaan Bhi Tere Gham Ne Bighone Nahi diya
Nasir Yoon Uski Yaad Chali Haath Thaam Ke
Mele Mein Is Jahan Ke khone Nahi diya**
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aao ik sajda kareiN aalam-e-mad'hoshi meiN
log kehtey heiN ke Saghar ko khuda yaad nahiN
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Uski batain bhi dil awaiz hain surat ki tarah
meri sochain bhi paraishan mere balon jaisi
Uski ankhon ko kabhi ghor se daikha hai Faraz
sonay walon ki tarah jagnay walon jaisi
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**hum ke Thairey ajnabi itni madaraatooN ke baad
phir banain gaiN aashnaa kitni mulaqatooN ke baad
un se jo kehney gaey thai "faiz" jaaN sadqa kiye
unkahee he reh gai voh baat sab baatooN ke baad**
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Rasheed sahib ko koi nahin janta, magar ye maqta :lajawab:
Partha tha main nimaaz samaje kar usse rasheed
Phir yun howa ke muje se qaza ho gaya woh shakhs
Complete Ghazal**: http://www.paklinks.com/gs/intikhaab/630789-mujh-se-kaza-ho-gaya-wo-shakhs.html
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