Mari udasi kee wajah na poochoo

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 5:05am

Mari udasi kee wajah na poochoo Mujahay apno nay he tanha rakha hai

Baas ak khawab ke khatir hum nay
Tamam umer ankhoon ko baad rakha hai

Ya aur baat hai ka jeetay hain aab behi
Taray baghar jeenay main kiya rakha hai

Ankhain barastee hain sawan ke taraha
Aab tari yaad main asa behi kiya rakha hai

Ay roshnee ka musafar tum ko kiya maloom
Hijar ke in andahari ratoon main kiya rakha hai

Kat pautliyoon ke taraha hain hum sub
Kisay khabar taqdeer ka fasloon main kiy rakha hai

By: Dilsay

cuteepie · July 13, 2003, 9:11am

buhet khoob :k:

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 9:45am

thanks

Amal · July 13, 2003, 12:59pm

Re: Mari udasi kee wajah na poochoo

Excellent Dilsay:k:…bohat khoob ghazal likhi hey aap ney. Thanx for sharing with us:)

system · July 13, 2003, 2:09pm

bohat khoobsurat hai :k::k::k:

Thanx 4 sharing..

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 5:38pm

Re: Re: Mari udasi kee wajah na poochoo

Thanks Amal jee… khushi is baat ke hai ka aap nay koyee correction nahi kee which means ka ya complete hai… should i consider it balanced… ?

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 5:39pm

Pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya…

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 13, 2003, 6:19pm

bohat khooooooooob :k:

keep it up

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 6:46pm

Thanks alot…

Muslim_Queen · July 13, 2003, 7:46pm

beautiful

ty for sharing.

Amal · July 13, 2003, 8:12pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Thanks Amal jee.... khushi is baat ke hai ka aap nay koyee correction nahi kee which means ka ya complete hai.... should i consider it balanced..... ?
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Dilsay behtari ki gunjaaish to hamesha rehti hey aur ye baat har kisi ke
leeye hey. Shaed aap ki ghazal meiN bhi ye gunjaaish majood ho, but I think you
are doing it yourself step by step, and I do not want you to overspeed:) Keep writing.

DiYa · July 13, 2003, 10:38pm

ncie

nice

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 11:19pm

Thanks alot

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 11:20pm

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*Originally posted by Amal: *

Dilsay behtari ki gunjaaish to hamesha rehti hey aur ye baat har kisi ke
leeye hey. Shaed aap ki ghazal meiN bhi ye gunjaaish majood ho, but I think you
are doing it yourself step by step, and I do not want you to overspeed:) Keep writing.
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Thanks alot it is really nice to have your comments and not only for me for ever one... Khuda aap ko khush rakhay...

Dilsay · July 13, 2003, 11:21pm

Re: ncie

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Originally posted by DiYa: *
nice
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Thanks alot

system · July 13, 2003, 11:29pm

Good One…

zidee · July 14, 2003, 12:25am

Re: Mari udasi kee wajah na poochoo

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Ankhain barastee hain sawan ke taraha
Aab tari yaad main asa behi kiya rakha hai

By: Dilsay
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BEAUTIFULL!!!