Mari saza........

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Meri jaan waqat aa giya hai
Meri saza mujah ko soona dee jaya

Gar chaharana hai sooli par mujahay
Dil kay taroon say rasi bana dee jaya

Garmiya e jazbat mousair nahi hum koo
Tapti dhooph main qabar bana dee jaya

by Dilsay

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bahut hi zabardast dilsay ji thanks for sharing!

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~nice~

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Hmm... bohat khoob..

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buhat khub. sahe kaha aap nay

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Thanks

Lamyah
JJ
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Tun

:)

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Very nice DilSay:k:…keep it up.

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Nice one, keep it up and Thanks for sharing:-)

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:k:

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very nice :k:

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bohat khoob, Dilsay… :k::k: keep it up.. :slight_smile:

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buhat khoob:k:

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very nice:k::k:

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Thanks to every one....

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:k:

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Dilsay :k:…jab bhi aap ki posts parhi hai to aksar ye Faiz ki nazm yaad aayee hai so here it is.

kyon maira dil shaad nahi hai kyon khamosh raha kerta hon
choro mairee raam kahani main jaisa bhi hon acha hon

maira dil ghamgeen hai to kya ghamgeen dunya hai sari
ye dukh taira hai na maira hum sub ki jageer hai pyari

to gar mairee bhi ho jai dunya kai gham yonhi rahaingai
paap kai phandai zulm kai bandhan apnai katai kat na sakaingai

gham har halat main mohlik hai apna ho ya aur kisi ka
roona dhona jee ko jalana yon bhi hamara yon bhi hamara

kyon na jahan ka gham apna lain baad main sub tadbeerain sochain
baad main sukh kai sapnai dekhain sapnon ki tabeerain sochain

hum nai mana jang kare hai sar phatain gai khoon bahai ga
khon main gham bhi bah jai ga hum na rahain gham bhi na rahai ga

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bhoot khoob :-~)

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thanks and i dont know why my postings remind you of him can you please let me know why?

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Dilsay .....in this poem there is a feeling of sadness and shikayats at the same time a feeling of helplessness your posts often are about the same feelings. at least i feel so..that's why they remind me of this poem

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Yes i am helpess....