Mari dastanay mohabat

Dilsay · April 21, 2003, 5:56pm

** Pahlay Janab thay Phir aap howay Phir aap say tum howa Phir tum say jaan howa Aur phir jaan say Tum howa Tum say phir aap howa Aap say phir janab howa Baas ya he mari dastanay Mohabat hai**

by Dilsay

HeArT_HaCKeR · April 21, 2003, 6:01pm

beautiful :k:

keep it Up

system · April 21, 2003, 6:28pm

wow, :k: waqaii main aisa h hota hai..

Azad · April 21, 2003, 9:09pm

hummm

Azad · April 21, 2003, 9:13pm

Re: Mari dastanay mohabat

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *

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Pahlay Janab thay
Phir aap howay
Phir aap say tum howa
Phir tum say jaan howa
Aur phir jaan say
Tum howa
Tum say phir aap howa
Aap say phir janab howa
Baas ya he mari dastanay
Mohabat hai**

by Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

hummm X 2

Sir howay Taj howay
Hum to lajawab howay

Rabia_Chaudhry · April 22, 2003, 1:03am

kool

wah ji wah dilsay,........kool poem i like it,......

Khushioon ki arzoo mein muqaddar bhi sogaye
Andhi chali kuch aisi kay apnay bhi kho gaye
Kia khoob tha tumhara yeh andaaz dostoo!!!
Hamdard bun ke aye thay kaantay chubhoo gaye

Swera · April 22, 2003, 1:46am

Buhat khoob. Very nice.

I like your poetry. :)

Keep writing.

Dilsay · April 22, 2003, 3:02pm

Thanks every one.....

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 22, 2003, 7:06pm

very nice:k::k:

Dilsay · April 23, 2003, 6:17am

Thanks alot un ka jin ka main pahlay nahi kah saka....