maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see'pah haiN

Paglee · February 4, 2003, 12:13pm

maiN dya’reY huRf maiN muzhamil maiN shikasta pa maiN shikasta dil
mujhaY naaz apnaY sakhuN pe tha so wo kaaR ghaR nahi ho raha

maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see’pah haiN
magaR ab jo maa’Rka dil ka hai wohi muj se saR nahi ho raha

Dilsay · February 4, 2003, 12:15pm

Beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllll

arifnawaz1 · February 4, 2003, 12:32pm

Nice :k:

Amal · February 4, 2003, 1:16pm

Re: maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see’pah haiN

Indeed beautiful:k:…poori ghazal kiuN nahi post ki?

WiseGuy · February 4, 2003, 4:38pm

Re: maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see’pah haiN

Bohat Khoob Paglee :k: :k: :k:

koshish jari rakhiya,
yaqeenan Maa’Rka dil bhi saR ho jaye ga,
Aur dil ka sukoon bhi kaaR ghaR ho ga…
Koshish Shart hai… :nahnah:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 4, 2003, 5:00pm

Re: maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see'pah haiN

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*Originally posted by Paglee: *

maiN dya'reY huRf maiN muzhamil maiN shikasta pa maiN shikasta dil
mujhaY naaz apnaY sakhuN pe tha so wo kaaR ghaR nahi ho raha

maRay sheR is k gawah haiN k haRoof meRi see'pah haiN
magaR ab jo maa'Rka dil ka hai wohi muj se saR nahi ho raha
[/QUOTE]

Beautiful ** Paglee Sis **:)

Philanthrope · February 4, 2003, 6:05pm

:k:

kashaan · February 4, 2003, 6:59pm

Thats Gr888888 Paglee jee

thats really some thing out class, inspiring one , wot a mentisental gal you are :)
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Shikasta zaroor hon magar murda khyaal na kar mujhey... Zakhmi sheron key vaar bahut zordaar howa kartay hain...................................... so keep the spirit up paglee jee
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chand_chehra · February 4, 2003, 10:23pm

bohat khoob :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · February 5, 2003, 5:15am

bohut khoob:k::k:

Paglee · February 6, 2003, 1:56am

thanks dilse---arfin---kashan...pharmisist..C_Cand gul sis

Paglee · February 6, 2003, 1:58am

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thanks…Paglee koshish nahi karra karti..;)..sab kuch aisay he ho jata ..:)..begaier koshish k

Paglee · February 6, 2003, 1:59am

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thanks Amal bus us waqat pata nahi keon yehi do sher acahy lagya puri gazal be post kar day ghi next time k leay be kuch bachana tha na ..

BanJaraa · February 6, 2003, 3:54am

Pgleee!!!!

ghazal main bandesh-e-ilfaz hi naheen kafi..... asar ke liye khoon jighaar bi chaye

bouhat hi nice hai.... haan pori ghazal kion nai likhi?

:)

_Nazish · February 6, 2003, 4:07am

Beautiful!

Paglee · February 8, 2003, 2:33pm

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*Originally posted by BanJaraa: *
Pgleee!!!!

ghazal main bandesh-e-ilfaz hi naheen kafi..... asar ke liye khoon jighaar bi chaye

bouhat hi nice hai.... haan pori ghazal kion nai likhi?

:)
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khoonnnn banjara keon dara rahya ho khoon kharaba kar k yahan ye peorty forum hai na..pangha farm nahi ;)
thanks any way ap ko achi lagi ..:)

Paglee · February 8, 2003, 2:34pm

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*Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *
Beautiful!
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thanks.....:)

weteyes82 · February 8, 2003, 3:23pm

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm....
cooooooooolllllllllllllll................
good I wonder poori ghazal kaisii ho gii...jaldii post kerna