Maray lafz kho gaya hain

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 4:10pm

**Kisi maqam par behi waqat par nahi thay
Kaheen subaha tu kahin sham ko nahi thay

Ya faslay hain asy jinhain katana hai tanha
Ya jantay howay behi ka maray sath tum nahi thay

Tujahay dekhnay ke hasrat mary dil ke arzoo hai
Maray paas is say pahlay asy khawab behi nahi they

Ak main he nahi tanha jo khoya hoon jahan main
Ya ishq kay musafar kahan kahan nahi they

Maray lafz kho gaya hain mari sooch hai parashan
Hum is say pehlay itnay na shad behi nahi they
**

by Dilsay

Azad · March 19, 2003, 4:33pm

bohut khoob …:k:

kia mushkil hay ja kar daikh aao na

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 6:31pm

thanks

Mushkil hai bohat mushkil
Chahat ka bhoola dayna
Asan nahi ya dill ke
Agh bojah deena

system · March 19, 2003, 6:47pm

really very beautiful.. :k::k:

Thanx alot Dilsay..

ullujii · March 19, 2003, 6:49pm

nice :k:

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 7:32pm

Thanks guys.........

Amal · March 19, 2003, 7:52pm

Re: Maray lafz kho gaya hain

Bohat khoob Dilsay…qaafye aapas mein nahi
mil rahey heiN lekin tamaam aashaar meiN rhythm
majood hey. QaafyoN par dhiyaan rakha kareiN,
mazeed nikhaar peda ho ga aap ki tehreeroN meiN.
A remarkable effort anyhow:k::)…keep writing.

Dilsay · March 19, 2003, 8:29pm

Re: Re: Maray lafz kho gaya hain

Amal jee thanks…

main shahari tu nahi hoo na aap ke taraha… jo dill main hoota hai likh deeta hoon… such tu ya hai ka mujahay kafi ka pata behi nahi hai if you can explain it to me i will be greatful to you…

thanks again for liking it…

chand_chehra · March 19, 2003, 10:05pm

:k:

Rani_Pakistani · March 20, 2003, 1:50am

:k:
thx for sharing

Swera · March 20, 2003, 3:50am

bohat acha likha ap nai:)

** Alfaaz hamrai baijaan ho gai ab to

Kahoon kooch to wo samjta kooch hai.**
:(

Azad · March 20, 2003, 6:50am

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

thanks

Mushkil hai bohat mushkil
Chahat ka bhoola dayna
Asan nahi ya dill ke
*Agh bojah deena *
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hum nay daikh aanay ka pocha tha, raat our agh ka nahi :(

udaasaankhein · March 20, 2003, 6:34pm

:k:

weteyes82 · March 20, 2003, 8:02pm

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
main shahari tu nahi hoo na aap ke taraha.... jo dill main hoota hai likh deeta hoon... such tu ya hai ka mujahay kafi ka pata behi nahi hai if you can explain it to me i will be greatful to you....
thanks again for liking it...
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WELL BUHAT KHOOB DILSAY....ITNI ACHHI CONTRIBUTION KER K KEHTE HAIN K MEIN SHAIR TU NAHIN HOUN!!! AUR JAHAN TAK DIL KII BAAT KAA TAALUQ HAI....DILSAY..KHOOBSURAT DIL KHOOBSURAT BAATEIN HI TU SOCHTE HAIN :) ....KYA KHAYAL HAI!
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Dilsay · March 20, 2003, 8:29pm

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*Originally posted by weteyes82: *

WELL BUHAT KHOOB DILSAY....ITNI ACHHI CONTRIBUTION KER K KEHTE HAIN K MEIN SHAIR TU NAHIN HOUN!!! AUR JAHAN TAK DIL KII BAAT KAA TAALUQ HAI....DILSAY..KHOOBSURAT DIL KHOOBSURAT BAATEIN HI TU SOCHTE HAIN :) ....KYA KHAYAL HAI!
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Thanks alot
i have not words to even reply you i am touched.... acha laga... thanks....

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 21, 2003, 5:18am

ap roz ba roz acha likhnay lagay hain:k::k:
bohtu he Aala likha hai:k:
thanks and keep it up:)

Azad · March 21, 2003, 7:56am

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*Originally posted by weteyes82: *

WELL BUHAT KHOOB DILSAY....ITNI ACHHI CONTRIBUTION KER K KEHTE HAIN K MEIN SHAIR TU NAHIN HOUN!!! AUR JAHAN TAK DIL KII BAAT KAA TAALUQ HAI....** DILSAY..KHOOBSURAT DIL KHOOBSURAT BAATEIN HI TU SOCHTE HAIN :) ....KYA KHAYAL HAI! **
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Dilsay our acha dil HA, iss ka dil aghar nikal kar phaink do, din main raat ka saman ho jay :D