~~ Manzil na rahi koi thikaana bhi nahe hai ~~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amarbail January 9, 2011, 8:19pm 1

*Manzil na rahi koi thikaana bhi nahe hai
Waapis mujhe ghar laut ke jaana bhi nahe hai

Marne ki koi raah nikaali nahe jaati
Jeenay ke leye koi bahaana bhi nahe hai

Mein ne hi sikhaaya thaa ussay teer chalaana
Ab mere siwa koi nishaana bhi nahe hai

Yeh shehar ganeemat hai kahaan jaoge ‘Rahi’
Woh log nahe hain woh zamaana bhi nahe hai …

Sheal January 9, 2011, 8:48pm 2

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nice :k:

Amarbail January 9, 2011, 8:49pm 3

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Zahay-naseeb, shukriya ... !

UZ January 10, 2011, 5:33am 4

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Mein ne hi sikhaaya thaa ussay teer chalaana
Ab mere siwa koi nishaana bhi nahe hai

:k:

Shab-e-Hijar January 10, 2011, 6:26am 5

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Nice1 :k:

Lamhay January 10, 2011, 9:48am 6

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jawan nahin ap ka kiya kehna ..............!

Amarbail January 10, 2011, 2:33pm 7

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Bahut shukriya UZ, Shab aur Lamhay ...

Amal January 10, 2011, 2:40pm 8

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Achi ghazal hey Arif k: … thanx for sharing

Amal January 10, 2011, 2:42pm 9

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Acha, we got ya buddy....:D ... Arif, we got the mastermind ... pharr lao ennu :D

Amarbail January 10, 2011, 4:09pm 10

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Well, in se koi shikwa nahe, yeh tau meri rehbar hain zindagi ke peech-o-khum ki ...

pktun January 11, 2011, 9:48am 11

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*Mein ne hi sikhaaya thaa ussay teer chalaana
Ab mere siwa koi nishaana bhi nahe hai

Nyc yr
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