Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha
Meri Kisi Duaa Main Asar hee Nahin Raha

Jab Se Huyee Hai Dil Ko Khabar Hijar e Yaar Ki
Lafzon Ko Jornay Ka Hunnar hee Nahin Raha

Tu Kya Chala Gaya K Main sab kuch hi Kho Chuka
Manzil ko chhorh de K Safar hee Nahin Raha

Awaargi Main Lutf Kahan ab Azaab Hai
Par Kya Karoonga Loat K, Ghar hee Nahin Raha

Ginti K Din Hain Mout Main Lakin Ye Waqt Bhi
Kuchh aisey Tham Gaya Hai Guzar hee Nahin Raha

Dafna Do Mujhko Mout Se Pehle hii dosto Ab mai Kisi Ka Jaan e Jigar hee Nahin Raha

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

Last line ne poori poem ka sattyanas kr diya :(

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

nhi........
Mujhay to aisa nhi lagat.......
Aapko aisa Q lagta hy..........

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

Last line sounded like a teenager wrote it after loosing his love

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

is line ka ta`alluq age sy nhi...........Shiddat-e-Mohabbat sy hy.......ye alag baat hy k acha khayal nhi

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

It sounded quite immature :bummer:

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Re: Manzil Bhi Kho Chuki Hay Safar hi Nahin Raha

shayad…