Manzar Kashi Competition - 1

[Ethan_Hunt]

Re: Manzar Kashi Competition - 1

@muqawwee123

My entry:

Saaf suthre kapRe, dhule huwe saaf hath kise acha nahin lagte… koi bhi Maa baap ye nahin chahte ke unn ke bachon ke hath grease aur tail ki siyahi main runge jae. Mere maa baap ne bhi ye nahin chaha tha. unn ki aankhen mere roshan mustaqbil ke sapnon se jagmagati thin.. lekin wo ye hasrat liye hi iss dunia se chale gae.

BaRe behn bhai apne apne ghar aur bachon main aise uljhe ke maa baap ne jo mere baare main khwab dekhe the wo kabhi tabeer ko na puhunch sake. Lekin unka bhi kia qasoor.. suna hai mehngai ne to halaal haraam ka farq mita dia hai. her cheez ki tarah taleem bhi mehngi hai.. log apna pet kaat kar hi bachon ko mehnge school bhijwa sakte hain. mere jaise bin maa baap ke bachon ko sarkari school main bhi padhne ko mil jae to ghaneemat hai. Bhaiyon ne mujhe iss workshop main kaam dilwa dia hai, jahan main school se chutti ke baad raat tak kaam karta hoon. sham bhar jab tail aur grease ki siyahi main hath rangta hoon, tabhi iss qabil hota hoon ke apni kitabon, qalam siyahi aur school ki fees ka kharcha utha sakoon.

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