**Aks pas-e-aks hai kya maloom na tha
dil k ghao pe naqsh hai kya maloom na tha
iss nadani ko apni he gardaniye
muhabbat or hawis hai kya maloom na tha
azad sochain,azad ruh,azad wajood se phire
aik dil hawala-e-qafas hai maloom na tha
had darja khamoshi he bhali hai
kuch bolna bhi abas hai maloom na tha
tumhari chah main jo guzra wo sadi bhi lamha tha
tumhare hijr ka ikk pal bhi baras hua maloom na tha…**
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2nd one is really cool but 1st one 
kuch baat banti nazar naheen arahi kah
tumhari chah main jo guzra wo sadi bhi lamha tha**
yah youn naheen ho ga kia ?
tumhari chah main jo guzri** wo sadi bhi lamha th**i
**bcoz tum sadi ko pahlay la rahi ho tou uss he key baat hogi ?
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wah ustad-e-mohtaram zindagi mai pehli bar mistake nikaal di 
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**had darja khamoshi he bhali hai
kuch bolna bhi abas hai maloom na tha
tumhari chah main jo guzra wo sadi bhi lamha tha
tumhare hijr ka ikk pal bhi baras hua maloom na tha...
bohat khub....
taleeyan..:)
sat**
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**had darja khamoshi he bhali hai kuch bolna bhi abas hai maloom na tha
tumhari chah main jo guzra wo sadi bhi lamha tha tumhare hijr ka ikk pal bhi baras hua maloom na tha...
bohat khub....
taleeyan..:)
sat**
thanx Sadat.
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bahut khoobsurat...likha hai..
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**Aks pas-e-aks hai kya maloom na tha dil k ghao pe naqsh hai kya maloom na tha
iss nadani ko apni he gardaniye muhabbat or hawis hai kya maloom na tha
azad sochain,azad ruh,azad wajood se phire aik dil hawala-e-qafas hai maloom na tha
had darja khamoshi he bhali hai kuch bolna bhi abas hai maloom na tha
tumhari chah main jo guzra wo sadi bhi lamha tha tumhare hijr ka ikk pal bhi baras hua maloom na tha...**
Umda tehreer hey.
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Khoob, lekin yeh keya k pehlay 2 she'roN meiN "maoom na tha" ke sath lafz kya hay jabke baqi teen meiN se ghaaeb ho geya hay?
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azad sochain,azad ruh,azad wajood se phire aik dil hawala-e-qafas hai maloom na tha
...**
Azad yeh Azad woh hummmmmm Qayamat ki nishani hai ".....khaya piya kuch nahi glass thoRa 12 aane.
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thanx every one.
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Khoob, lekin yeh keya k pehlay 2 she'roN meiN "maoom na tha" ke sath lafz kya hay jabke baqi teen meiN se ghaaeb ho geya hay?
sorry paen mujhe ap ki bat samajh nai ai but i know k ap ne jo ghalti point out ki wo theek he ki :)
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ye kya likh dia jinnati zuban main :hinna:
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Hummmmmmm
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acha ye likha hai…acha :hinna:
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Acha hai :)
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Acha hai :)
thanx g.
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Good One Sh@zia..:k:
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thanx aryan.
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sorry paen mujhe ap ki bat samajh nai ai but i know k ap ne jo ghalti point out ki wo theek he ki :)
**
meray kehnay ka mat^lab yeh tha k radeef tabdeel ho gai hay
pehlay..........hai kya maloom na tha
aur ba'd meiN......hai maloom na tha**
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** meray kehnay ka mat^lab yeh tha k radeef tabdeel ho gai hay pehlay..........hai kya maloom na tha aur ba'd meiN......hai maloom na tha**
point out kerne ka bohat shukriah...asal main jo dil main ata hai likh deti hun or shairi k rules ka itna khas pata nai per ainda ehtiaat karun gi :)