Since people liked the naan poem so much with malika’s collaboration i came up with two more
Samosa poem
tumne kya banaya hai samosa
dil chahe ke dun tumhe bosa
ager aise hi bana do aik dosa
to ban jao bilkul mary posa
roti poem
meri pyaar narm si roti
tumhe kha kha ke mein ho gayi moti
reh gayi gardan itni chotii
ab hai sirf charbi na bachi koi boti
chalne ke liye
chahiye mujhe soti
p.s. mods if you think i’m ruining the thread then please delete this post and big thanks to mallu for inspiration
diwana
March 21, 2010, 3:48am
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Since people liked the naan poem so much with malika’s collaboration i came up with two more
Samosa poem
tumne kya banaya hai samosa
dil chahe ke dun tumhe bosa
ager aise hi bana do aik dosa
to ban jao bilkul mary posa
roti poem
meri pyaar narm si roti
tumhe kha kha ke mein ho gayi moti
reh gayi gardan itni chotii
ab hai sirf charbi na bachi koi boti
chalne ke liye
chahiye mujhe soti
p.s. mods if you think i’m ruining the thread then please delete this post and big thanks to mallu for inspiration
lol…
Jawabe Samosa poem!
Jis ka Khaya hai Tum Ne Samosa
Na Do Phir Us Ko Koi Bosa
Lag jaye Gi Mirchain us Ke Munh Main
Phir Kabhi Na Kare Ga Tum Pe Bharosa
(diwana)
BRAVO BRAVOooo … touce diwana touche
diwana
March 21, 2010, 4:15am
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Thanks Lib. Sorry mods,we have gone out of topic but it is still funny.
Let me mix both of your poems together and make one:
Enjoy!
Hum Ko Maaloom Hai Samosay Ki Haqeeqat Ae Dost
Is Mein Tum Ne Jamal Gota Chupa Rakkha Hai
Rotiaan Kha Ke Woh Lagti hai Bohat hi Bhaari
Aesa Lagta Hai Tipaai Pe Ghadra Rakkha Hai
diwana
March 21, 2010, 4:40am
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Re: Make a Poem…
^Yes Reha,
If you wish, move those posts to poetry section.
diwana
March 25, 2010, 3:49am
10
Re: Make A Poem…
Added some new here…
Is Tarha Tora Mera Maan Us Zaalim Ne
Jaise De Jaye Koi Durwesh Ko Sikka Khota
Ek Hi Khaya Samosa Jo Bohat Tha Chota
Aathween Baar Main Bhaga Hoon Pakar Ke Lota
Haalat e Zaar Meri Dekh Ke Ab Rotay Hain
Wo Mere Dost Jo Kehtay Thay Mujhe Mota..!
Re: Make A Poem…
jab inspiration he mallu jese naam se hogi toh aisa he takhleek ho ga na,any how v funny indeed.
Jawab e Samosa
Zingi Mein Kitnay He Zulam Kamata Hai Samosa
Pehlay Jalta Hai Phir Chabaya Jata Hai Samosa
Jaan Kay Anjam Phir Bhi Kitna Fresh Lagta Hai
Zindgi Guzarnay Ka Fun Sikhata Hai Samosa