Make A Poem........

libranrulz · March 21, 2010, 3:20am

Since people liked the naan poem so much with malika’s collaboration i came up with two more

Samosa poem

tumne kya banaya hai samosa
dil chahe ke dun tumhe bosa
ager aise hi bana do aik dosa
to ban jao bilkul mary posa

roti poem

meri pyaar narm si roti
tumhe kha kha ke mein ho gayi moti
reh gayi gardan itni chotii
ab hai sirf charbi na bachi koi boti
chalne ke liye
chahiye mujhe soti

p.s. mods if you think i’m ruining the thread then please delete this post and big thanks to mallu for inspiration

Reha · March 21, 2010, 3:43am

Re: Make a Poem…

diwana · March 21, 2010, 3:48am

lol...

Jawabe Samosa poem!

Jis ka Khaya hai Tum Ne Samosa
Na Do Phir Us Ko Koi Bosa
Lag jaye Gi Mirchain us Ke Munh Main
Phir Kabhi Na Kare Ga Tum Pe Bharosa

(diwana)

libranrulz · March 21, 2010, 4:04am

BRAVO BRAVOooo ... touce diwana touche

diwana · March 21, 2010, 4:15am

Thanks Lib. Sorry mods,we have gone out of topic but it is still funny.

Let me mix both of your poems together and make one:

Enjoy!

Hum Ko Maaloom Hai Samosay Ki Haqeeqat Ae Dost
Is Mein Tum Ne Jamal Gota Chupa Rakkha Hai

Rotiaan Kha Ke Woh Lagti hai Bohat hi Bhaari
Aesa Lagta Hai Tipaai Pe Ghadra Rakkha Hai

diwana · March 21, 2010, 4:40am

Re: Make a Poem...

^Yes Reha,

If you wish, move those posts to poetry section. :)

aaliyahkhan1 · March 21, 2010, 5:06am

Re: Make A Poem…

Ali…too funny

system · March 24, 2010, 12:59pm

Re: Make A Poem........

hehehe

Sannan · March 24, 2010, 1:01pm

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diwana · March 25, 2010, 3:49am

Re: Make A Poem…

Added some new here…

Is Tarha Tora Mera Maan Us Zaalim Ne
Jaise De Jaye Koi Durwesh Ko Sikka Khota

Ek Hi Khaya Samosa Jo Bohat Tha Chota
Aathween Baar Main Bhaga Hoon Pakar Ke Lota

Haalat e Zaar Meri Dekh Ke Ab Rotay Hain
Wo Mere Dost Jo Kehtay Thay Mujhe Mota..!

Shazia_Arif · April 9, 2010, 8:10am

Re: Make A Poem........

jab inspiration he mallu jese naam se hogi toh aisa he takhleek ho ga na,any how v funny indeed.

arafatashraf · April 20, 2010, 4:15pm

Jawab e Samosa

Zingi Mein Kitnay He Zulam Kamata Hai Samosa
Pehlay Jalta Hai Phir Chabaya Jata Hai Samosa

Jaan Kay Anjam Phir Bhi Kitna Fresh Lagta Hai
Zindgi Guzarnay Ka Fun Sikhata Hai Samosa

:)

poetry_lover · April 27, 2010, 8:24am

Re: Make A Poem........

Aa is it funny??? :(