maiN us ki yaad maiN gum hooN k apnay aap maiN gum hooN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal April 18, 2006, 10:27pm 1

mujhay dar’yaa nahi likhna mujhay sehra nahi likhna
tasalsal se safar maiN hooN mujhay thahra nahi likhna

puranay raabtooN ki raakh ab taak dil maiN baqie hai
meri jalti hatheli pe naya wada nahi likhna

ana se jeet kar us ko agar maiN ne jo kho’yaa hai
mera noo’ha nahi likhna mera naghma nahi likhna

tumhari aankh maiN gar maiN kabhi chup chaap jal jaa’ooN
tum apni ankhoN maiN lakiN mera sadma nahi likhna

gawahi apnay dil se lo tumhara dil kia kahta hai
mujhay sucha nahi likhna mujhay jhoota nahi likhna

maiN us ki yaad maiN gum hooN k apnay aap maiN gum hooN
mujhay mahfil nahi likhna mujhay tanha nahi likhna

meri ankhoon maiN baataiN haiN magar chahray pe gahri chup
meri ankhaiN tu likh daina mera chahra nahi likhna

kahIn aisa na ho kasak is dil maiN rah jaa’ey
mera dukh dard likh daina magar gahara nahi likhna

Zamil April 19, 2006, 12:38am 2

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**Whattt a Post… **
**You have touched my heart… **
**Really… **

being_lonely April 19, 2006, 12:41am 3

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dard apanaataa hai paraa_e kaun
kaun sunataa hai aur sunaa_e kaun
kaun doharaa_e vo puraanii baat
Gam abhii soyaa hai jagaa_e kaun

nice sharing :)

Sannan April 19, 2006, 2:39am 4

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u r goin good Cuckoo ...:biggthumb

Shab-e-Hijar April 19, 2006, 5:26am 5

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bohat khoob koyal jano
thanks for sharing

HeArT_HaCKeR April 19, 2006, 10:55am 6

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one of my fav :) thanks for sharing...

Amal April 19, 2006, 12:21pm 7

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Bohat hi khoobsoorat ghazal hey Koyal. The best in recent times. Apni mod sey kahiye ke ghazal/nazm of the month start kareiN. Kisi kaam-shaam pe lagaaeiN unhey bhi

Amal April 19, 2006, 12:25pm 8

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BEINGLONELY, what it has to do with the gazal Koyal has posted? You should have quoted something from HER ghazal in HER thread. And you know you can always open a brand-new thread, absolutely free for your own stuff?

SunnyBoy April 19, 2006, 3:17pm 9

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buhat khoob

massi wali smilies

_Masoom_Muskaan April 20, 2006, 8:52am 10

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Koyal:

mujhay dar’yaa nahi likhna mujhay sehra nahi likhna
tasalsal se safar maiN hooN mujhay thahra nahi likhna

puranay raabtooN ki raakh ab taak dil maiN baqie hai
meri jalti hatheli pe naya wada nahi likhna

ana se jeet kar us ko agar maiN ne jo kho’yaa hai
mera noo’ha nahi likhna mera naghma nahi likhna

tumhari aankh maiN gar maiN kabhi chup chaap jal jaa’ooN
tum apni ankhoN maiN lakiN mera sadma nahi likhna

gawahi apnay dil se lo tumhara dil kia kahta hai
mujhay sucha nahi likhna mujhay jhoota nahi likhna

maiN us ki yaad maiN gum hooN k apnay aap maiN gum hooN
mujhay mahfil nahi likhna mujhay tanha nahi likhna

meri ankhoon maiN baataiN haiN magar chahray pe gahri chup
meri ankhaiN tu likh daina mera chahra nahi likhna

kahIn aisa na ho kasak is dil maiN rah jaa’ey
mera dukh dard likh daina magar gahara nahi likhna

v nice :k:

ASA April 20, 2006, 8:58am 11

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Awesome as usual… :k:

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:07am 12

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Really…btw do u still have heart:hoonh:

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:08am 13

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thanks:)

why do men think....

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:09am 14

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:halo: chukoo..kon ho ap ye tu sirf aik he banda bolta phir nick change kar dya:hoonh:

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:10am 15

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thanks shabo:)

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:12am 16

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thanks heart...heacker

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:17am 17

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MOd wo "APP KI HAIN" un ki chuti karain naam k mutabiq sahi ja rehi wo

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:22am 18

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thanks SB

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:22am 19

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thanks SB

Koyal April 22, 2006, 11:19am 20

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thanks SB

D@rkngt