Main unhi lamhon men.......

main un hi lamhon main jee raha tha
na jin mian koi hakeekaten thin
na koi lamha wisaal ka tha
ajab si bekhudi ko main ne
dil o nazar main sama liya tha
main beete lamhon ki rahguzar par
udaas yaadon ka hath thaame
tanha akela hi aate jaate
musafiron ko dekhta tha
ke shaid un main se to kisi ko
wisaal e yaar ka lamha lamha
poore ufaq aur poori adaa se
rah e wafa main naseeb ho ga
koi to ho ga ke jis ka chehra
teri nazar ki musafaton main
saroor e jaan ban ke thehra ho ga
magar kahin un musafaton main
ya beete lamhon ki ahaton main
na apna koi bhi aks paya
na apna koi bhi haq paya
dil o nazar ki har ik rah par
raqeeb e jaan ko hi saath paya!!

umeed hai ye koshish apko pasand aae gi.

v good sis :sara:

ap to thi hai phri tha kyu :aq:

wasy very nice try … keep it up :slight_smile:

ap to thi hai phri tha kyu :aq:

** soory i dnt understand it,wats this?**

she is saying:

“Aap tau “thee” haiN, phir “Thaa” kiyuN?” in the first line..

Re: Main unhi lamhon men.......

abeeha.. chhupay rustam ho aap.. achanak se itni achi poetry kerna shuru ho gaye :$

Tha orr thee pay mitti paoo it nice to read.......................:)

Ahmer yeh kaam aik din achanak he warid hoota hai................and u come to know you can express your feelings:)

janab ye kaam to men kafi arse se krti hon but ye sab to acha is liye hai kyun k ap sab ise pasand karte hen.:hugz:

thanx muddii for ur praise.
wo kia hay na jab amad hoti hy to "tha" aur "thi" itne imp nhy rehte.