Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity September 22, 2007, 7:07am 1

Aik Ghazal,

Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan
Meri Itni Kahan Auqaat Sajan

Meray Jeewan Ki Saari Khushiaan
Teri Nazron Ki Kheraat Sajan

Tujhe Zor-o-Shor Se Yaad Karay
Meray Naino’n Ki Barsaat Sajan

Ye Rung, Ghazal, Dunya’Daari
Teri Chahat Ke Asraat Sajan

Teri Soch Main Saara Din Beetay
Teray Khuaab Sajayen Raat Sajan

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

SJ September 22, 2007, 8:21am 2

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Awwww…soo swet ahmer…aj kal baree sweet sweet poetry likh rahay ho???
khair hai na:faizy:
tum bohat acha likhtay ho dear…jab log baray ban jatay hain tu…puranay doston ko bhula daytay hain…tum tu aisa nahin karo gay na???

redidentity September 22, 2007, 8:56am 3

Re: Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan..

thnx dear..

nahi yar aisi koi baat nahi hai.. ye ghazal mainay 2004 main likhi thee..
thnx k aap ko pasand aati hai.. wese em not gonna be mash’hoor.. dont worry aur ager hogaya bhi to na to nahi bhoolon ga.. behnay bhool janay k leay nahi hoteen..

fara September 22, 2007, 9:33am 4

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Buhat achay!

Prince_Ali September 22, 2007, 10:12am 5

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wow! good goin Ahmer! :k: :k: :k:

fizatiq September 22, 2007, 10:47am 6

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bohat khoob..............keep it up

SJ September 22, 2007, 1:36pm 7

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You Are Really very Sweet Brother:hugz:

redidentity September 24, 2007, 4:12am 8

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Thnx fara prince and fiza

sonia.. aap se zada sweet to nahi na main dear

Shumaisa September 24, 2007, 9:12am 9

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Ye bhi buhat achii hai.. hamesha ki tarah

Kis k liye likhte ho ? ..Mujhe kaan mein bata do, main kissi ko nahin bataun gi - Pakkka..

redidentity September 25, 2007, 4:38am 10

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Thnx Shumaisa :)

arsalanh2000 September 25, 2007, 5:01am 11

Re: Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan..

Dear Ahmer,

It is a very good poem u shared with us, its amazing.

Lekin Shumaisa ki baat theek hay, Ye sub shayiri kis kay liay ?????? :))

redidentity September 25, 2007, 5:42am 12

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thnx arsalan :)

Ye Ilm Ka Sauda Ye Risalay Ye Kitabain
Ek Shakhs Ki Yaadon Ko Bhulanay Ke Leay Hain

:)

tum_bin_1 September 25, 2007, 4:39pm 13

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Zaberdast :k:

redidentity September 26, 2007, 4:02am 14

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Thnx tum_bin so sweet of U

AQ October 1, 2007, 4:28am 15

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sweet words

redidentity October 1, 2007, 4:31am 16

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thnx Anwaar Jeee.. :):):):):)

Azad October 1, 2007, 2:27pm 17

Re: Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan..

acha hay :k:

redidentity October 2, 2007, 4:06am 18

Re: Main Tujh Se Karon Teri Baat Sajan..

thnx Azaaad Jee :)