Main toot chooka hoon......

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Main toot chooka hoon
Tumaharay samnay he toota hoon
Aab na chalna nangay paoon kamray main
Maray khawaboon kay zaray tumahain na chubh jain

by Dilsay

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bohut khoob dilsay:k::k:
keep writing:)

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nahin dilsay yaar! aise naa totoo…kirchiyaan apne paaoun mein hi na chubh jain..
yaar elfe laga lo …plz.
well just kidding..
achha likha hai :k:

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aab tu toot chooka hoo kiya karoon

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bahut hi zabardast dilsay ji no doubt U r da best !

mein tooth chuki hoo .....

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nice :k:

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Re: Main toot chooka hoon......

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Main toot chooka hoon
Tumaharay samnay he toota hoon
Aab na chalna nangay paoon kamray main
Maray khawaboon kay zaray tumahain na chubh jain

by Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

Buhat khuub, Keep it up:-)

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Appreciated:k:…
Great:flower1:…