main toot chkka hun.....

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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mazrut kay saath. main nay is nazm ko thora sa change kiya hay.

main toot chukka hun
tumharay samnay he toota hun
ab nan chulna nangay paun kumray main
meray khwaboan ki kirchiyaan nan tumhain chubh jayain

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Re: main toot chkka hun.....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ameen: *
mazrut kay saath. main nay is nazm ko thora sa change kiya hay.

main toot chukka hun
tumharay samnay he toota hun
ab nan chulna nangay paun kumray main
meray khwaboan ki kirchiyaan nan tumhain chubh jayain
[/QUOTE]

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aww it very deep :)

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bohut khoob … :k: thanks for sharing … aap ka zooq acha hota ja raha hay :wink:

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Re: main toot chkka hun.....

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ameen: *
mazrut kay saath. main nay is nazm ko thora sa change kiya hay.

main toot chukka hun
tumharay samnay he toota hun
ab nan chulna nangay paun kumray main
meray khwaboan ki kirchiyaan nan tumhain chubh jayain
[/QUOTE]

yaar ya mara nahi tha....

well what the change you brought can you also mentione that