main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa:
mohabbat main maaray urdu k shairo
mohabbat k siwa duniya main kuch aur bhi hai
mohabbat se bhari nazmon aur ghazlon k siwa
duniya main aur bhi doosri shaaeri hai

jo ho sakka likh kar dikhlayaa
kuch tajurmay kar k dikhlayaa
main shuroo hi se kehta aaya
apni shaeri ka mod badlo

lakin mohabbat ek cheez hai
jab milti nahin shaer ko
dhoondnay isay a jaata hai
mohabbat ki shaeri main
shaaeron k liyay mohabbat ek gur k pahaar hai
jitna bhi khaayain kum nahin hota
gur kha-kha k gun-gunatay hain
apni mohabbti shsaeri likhay baith jaatay hain

mujhay aisee shaeri se kyaa laina -
sub jhuthay-muthaty lafzon ka pahaar hai
un k dil ki aarzoo hai,
un ka bara bura haal hai
mohabbat k shaairon ko
mohabbat milna bada mushkil hai*

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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

yaar kopra saahab! aap kee shaairi maiN Jalan kaa unsar kaafi numaayaaN hai :D

(for men)Were You close to your fathers?
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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

jin shaareon k sar main mohabbat ghusi huee hai
jin aashikon k dil main mohabbat ghussi huee hai
unsay hamari bari jalan hai
yeh koee Freud ka shaagird hamain kehnay aa giya
hamaari shaeeri main jalan dhoonday aa giya

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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

that was pretty lame, man.

you need to work on "tukk bandi" of the poem :)

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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

Inventors of lame excuses find *
*everything is lame
it's nothing new
it's understandable
we need lame people too
what would the world without them?

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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

^ and we call them khopra
world without them?
what do you think?
shall be like vegetable tokra
:)

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Re: main to yahaan yeh kehnay aaya thaa

waaray waaray jaawaan,
asliyat aap main kyaa hai,
ustay kurbaan honday jaawaan.
usdeeyay maanain,
toon kyoon jamiaa eho jiya munda?

Wah! Wah! Respeced and profoundly revered Sir Sahib Ji,
Jitni bhi aap ki tareef kee jaayay kam hai.

Cheers, not jeers.