Main titli ko sulaa doonga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Main titli ko sulaa doonga
Zara tum shaam honay do

Main jugnu ko jaga doonga
Zara tum shaam honay do

****Kahan ********aaghaaz hota hai **
Kahan anjaam hota hai

**
Hunar**** saaray sikha doonga****
Zara tum shaam honay do

Mujhe**** itni mahaarat hai****
K main saada se lafzon mein

Tumhain**** dil kash bana doonga****
**Zara tum shaam honay do

Meri** nam-naak aankhoon ko****
Na dekho tum haqarat se

Main tumko bhi rula doonga
**Zara tum shaam honay do

Kahan** hui tumhari shaam****
Tum ne mujhse poocha hai

****Jahan ****hogi bata doonga
Zara tum shaam honay do !!

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

*Kabhi tanhaee ki raatein tumhein ziyada sataeen to *

*Kabhi titli na bole to,kabhi jugnu lout jae to *

*Kabhi jab dil bhi bhar jae,koi jab sun na paye to *

*Kabhi sab dost saathi bhi jo tum se rooth jaein to *

*Kabhi jab khud se lar ker thakan se chur ho jao to *

*Kabhi chahte hoi bhi khud akele ro na pao to *

*Apni aankhon ko band karna mujhe aawaz dena *

*Phir mere tassawur se jo chahe baatein kar dena *

*mere kandhe pe sar rakh ke tum jitna chahe rolena *

*Jab mein khud lout jaoon to apni duniya chale jaana *

*Magar bus itna kehna hey *

*Ke jab bhi dukh yaa khushiyun mein *

*Hamein dil se pukaro gey *

Hamein tum saath paogey

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

[quote=kaleemhk]

*Main titli ko sulaa doonga*
*Zara tum shaam honay do*

*Main jugnu ko jaga doonga*
*Zara tum shaam honay do*

*Kahan **aaghaaz hota hai *
**Kahan anjaam hota hai

**
*Hunar***** saaray sikha doonga****
*Zara tum shaam honay do*

*Mujhe***** itni mahaarat hai****
*K main saada se lafzon mein*

*Tumhain***** dil kash bana doonga****
***Zara tum shaam honay do*

***Meri***** nam-naak aankhoon ko****
*Na dekho tum haqarat se*

*Main tumko bhi rula doonga*
***Zara tum shaam honay do*

***Kahan***** hui tumhari shaam****
*Tum ne mujhse poocha hai*

*Jahan **hogi bata doonga*
*Zara tum shaam honay do !!*

[quote=Lutfullah urf Abdullateef Qadri]

Muhtaram Kaleem Haidar Saahab meri yeh poochne ki jurrat aur gustaakhi muaaf farmaaen keh aapke bheje hue aakhri sher :-
"Kahan hui tumhari shaam, tumne mujhse poochha hai
** Jahan hogi bata doonga, zara tum shaam aane do !!"**
ke misra e awwal mein **"Kahan hogi tumhari shaam, tumne mujhse poochha hai" **likha hota to kaisa hota?

Shukriya!:)

"Hui muddat keh Ghalib mar gaya par ab bhi yaad aaye! Wo har ik baat par kehna keh youn hota to kya hota?"

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

Dear Latif,

Agar iss tarha'n hota to bhee achah he hota............:)

Thanks you................

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

nice sharing....thanx!

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

Thanks you MK....:)

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

nice ones…i have the second one in my poems collection…:k:

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

sayeeen kia kar rahay ho yeh to 4 6 din pehle he main ne share ki thi :( chalo koi baat nahi mera apka alag to nahi tusi bhaai ho saaday khush raho A.hafiz

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Re: Main titli ko sulaa doonga

Thanks you muslim girl and beinglonely ....:)

Beinglonely : Adda mazarat k sath main nay shayed aap ki urai hui titli nahi deykhi warna main ye titli main na urata.......:(