~*MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN*~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN,
FaQat ItNa hI kEhtA tHa . . .,
KHaFa hOnA mAnA LainA,
YeH SaDiyOn sAy RiwayAt haY,
Gilay sHikwaY kaROo mujH saY,
TumHain Jana’N IjaZaT haY,
MaGar Ik BaaT meRi bHi,
TuM yaaD RakH LaIna,
KabHi aiSa BhI hOta hAy ,
HaWa’aIn RukH baDalTIi haiN,
KhaTa’aiN ho hI jati hain,
KhaFa hOnA bHi mumKiN hAy,
KhaTa hOnA bhI mumKin haY,
HaMaisHa Yaad RakhNa Tum,
Ta’aluQ toOt jaNayY sAy,
Kabhi toota nahin kertay…!!!

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

Niceee :lajawab:
Ur nick is nice tooo

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

thnxx little princess :)

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

Y did u chose this nick?

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

bss aisy hee. thora asha laga and change be thora saa. warna sahil to bhoot he xeyda hain yahn net pay :p

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

Now u sound familiar :bummer:

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

no way… i’m new here :confused:

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

Ur writing andaz and style of expression sounded like someone on GS…
Nevermind
:welcome: to GS

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

thxx :) but im not that sm1 :p

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

Oke :)

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

boht achi nazm hai har bar parh kar achi lagti hai lekin mere khayal se is main aik choti si galti hai shaed typing ki..

Ta’aluQ rooth jaNayY sAy,
kabhi toota nahin kertay...

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

inno jee thx for correction :)

Ta’aluQ rooth jaNayY sAy,
kabhi toota nahin kertay...

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Re: ~MaiN suN k uSkI sUB bataiN~

u are always welcome :)