Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 7:44am 1

Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga
Yeh sheher sara hee so chukka hai main jagta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Main pichlay mausam kee baarishooN ko phir apni aankhooN main la raha hooN
K ab kay sawan ke rutt main, main bhee yeh sochta hoon k kuch likhooN ga

Woh saaray rastay kay jin pe hum ne muhabatooN ke safar kiya thay
Main ab jo un per kabhi gaya tu yeh janta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Bahar rut k woh khawaab saray jo mairi palkooN pe aa sajjay thay
Woh khawaab aankhooN main jal chukkay hain main jal raha hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Main lafz palkooN se xhun raha hooN, main khawaab kaghaz pe bun raha hooN
Main tairi aahat bhee sun raha hoon, main janta hoon k kuch likhooN ga

Ajeeb rutt hai judaiooN kee udaas din hain udaas raatain !!!
**Main chand muhmil se lafz likh ker yeh sochta hoon k kuch likhooN ga **

Atif Saeed

redidentity August 7, 2007, 7:48am 2

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Nice.. :)

SJ August 7, 2007, 8:09am 3

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Very nice..................
*Waisay app nay Kuch likha bhi hai ya nahin abhee tak?:D *

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 8:27am 4

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Copy paste specialist

SJ August 7, 2007, 8:50am 5

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

awwww…
mein app ki zaatee kaawish k baray mein daryaft kar rahee thee:smack:

NikamiJano August 7, 2007, 12:36pm 6

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

Main lafz palkooN se chun raha hooN
** main khawaab kaghaz pe bun raha hooN**
Main tairi aahat bhee sun raha hoon
** main janta hoon k kuch likhooN ga**

Ajeeb rutt hai judaiooN kee udaas din hain udaas raatain !!!!
*Main chand muhmil se lafz likh ker yeh sochta hoon k kuch likhooN ga *

v nice sharing ocean :)

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 2:01pm 7

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

thanks NJ ji :)

Sheal August 7, 2007, 2:16pm 8

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

very nice :). thanks for sharing.

Prince_Ali August 7, 2007, 5:29pm 9

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

buhut khub :k:

Aus v india, second test

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 5:57pm 10

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

thanks :)

Shab-e-Hijar August 7, 2007, 6:13pm 11

Re: Main shaam yadoon kay jangalooN main guzarta hooN k kuch likhooN ga

ajeeb si hai poem parhtay parhtay dehan kahi aur layjati