maiN ne khushbu ko likha dastaras-e-gum-shudgii

Koyal · July 15, 2004, 3:08am

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vusa’t-e-chashm ko andoh-e-basaarat likhaa
maiN ne ik vasl ko ik hijar kii haalat likhaa

maiN ne likha k safaa-e-dil kabi khaalii na ho
aur kabi Khaalii ho bhi to malaamat likhaa

maiN ne paravaaz likhi hadd-e-falaq se aage
aur be-baal-o-parii ko bhii nihaayat likhaa

maiN ne khushbu ko likha dastaras-e-gum-shudgi
rang ko faasalaa rakhane kii riyaayat likhaa

zaKhm likhane ke liye maiN ne likhi hai Gafalat
khuun likhna tha magar maiiN ne haraarat likha

maiN ne taabir ko taharir meiN aane na diyaa
khvaab likhate hu_e mohataaj-e-basharat likha

koii aasaan rafaaqat nahiN likhii maiN ne
qarb ko jab bhi likhaa jazb-e-raqaabat likhaa

itane daao.n se guzar kar ye Khayaal aataa hai
‘K’ kyaa tum ne kabhii harf-e-nadaamat likhaa

cuteepie · July 15, 2004, 3:12am

nice 1 :k:

Pramod · July 15, 2004, 4:49am

wow..beautiful ghazal.
thanks for sharing..

Azad · July 15, 2004, 6:57am

hummm

ASA · July 15, 2004, 7:30am

wah… bouhat khoob.. :k:

system · July 15, 2004, 9:07am

nice

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 15, 2004, 6:59pm

nice1:k:

K_Khan · July 15, 2004, 9:20pm

very nice Koyal

PS: likhte likhte haath naheen thakai

Koyal · July 17, 2004, 10:25am

thanks cute..

Koyal · July 17, 2004, 10:26am

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*Originally posted by Pramod: *
wow..beautiful ghazal.
thanks for sharing..
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:)

Koyal · July 17, 2004, 10:27am

Koyal · July 17, 2004, 10:31am

thanks sweeto…

Koyal · July 17, 2004, 10:56am

Mirza_Ruswa · July 17, 2004, 12:01pm

Re: maiN ne khushbu ko likha dastaras-e-gum-shudgii

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

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vusa't-e-chashm ko andoh-e-basaarat likhaa
maiN ne ik vasl ko ik hijar kii haalat likhaa

maiN ne likha k safaa-e-dil kabi khaalii na ho
aur kabi Khaalii ho bhi to malaamat likhaa

maiN ne paravaaz likhi hadd-e-falaq se aage
aur be-baal-o-parii ko bhii nihaayat likhaa

maiN ne khushbu ko likha dastaras-e-gum-shudgi
rang ko faasalaa rakhane kii riyaayat likhaa

zaKhm likhane ke liye maiN ne likhi hai Gafalat
khuun likhna tha magar maiiN ne haraarat likha

maiN ne taabir ko taharir meiN aane na diyaa
khvaab likhate hu_e mohataaj-e-basharat likha

koii aasaan rafaaqat nahiN likhii maiN ne
qarb ko jab bhi likhaa jazb-e-raqaabat likhaa

itane daao.n se guzar kar ye Khayaal aataa hai
'K' kyaa tum ne kabhii harf-e-nadaamat likhaa

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Salaam

Behtareen intekhaab
kiyaa baat hai

iss likhnay likhanay ki ghazal ko paRh kar hamen bhi kuchh yaad aagaya!!

Bistar e naaaz ko dekha jo shikan say khaali
bay hissi mainay likhi uss nay saleeqa likhaa

jab kahaa mainay laga rehta hai dhRka dil ka
uss nay dil dekh dawa sochi dilasaa likhaa

khush rehiyay

WiseGuy · July 17, 2004, 2:44pm

Nice Koyal G.

Koyal · July 19, 2004, 10:20am

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Nice Koyal G.
[/QUOTE]

thanks WG..:)

Koyal · July 19, 2004, 10:21am

Re: Re: maiN ne khushbu ko likha dastaras-e-gum-shudgii

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mirza Ruswa: *

Salaam

Behtareen intekhaab
kiyaa baat hai

iss likhnay likhanay ki ghazal ko paRh kar hamen bhi kuchh yaad aagaya!!

Bistar e naaaz ko dekha jo shikan say khaali
bay hissi mainay likhi uss nay saleeqa likhaa

jab kahaa mainay laga rehta hai dhRka dil ka
uss nay dil dekh dawa sochi dilasaa likhaa

khush rehiyay
[/QUOTE]

wowww ap kahan se a jatey achanak unkle mirza......and thanks for adding sum sher..:)

Koyal · July 19, 2004, 10:24am

shukria…haan koyal nice tu hai na

PS: thaak tu gaye they ab kia karen LOGO k leay likhna he parta na

Seedha_Saada · July 19, 2004, 10:30am

nice :k:

Burnished_Stone · July 21, 2004, 9:38am

nice :)