Main Nay Jab...

This is sweet, Enjoy it…

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meeri urdu zara kamzoor hai

:mocking:

wowwwwwww, beautiful.. :k:

waisey is ko poetry section main hona chaheyey tha.. :slight_smile:

^
iss icon se yeh bhi pata chalta hai ke app har jaga se kumzoor ho :stuck_out_tongue:

Rab Rakha

DerVaisH

buhat khoob :k:

good choice

Can You Please Translate?

zara :hoonh:

meney jab likhna seekha tha, pahley tera naam likha tha
mein woh sabr-e-sameem hoon jissney baar-e-amaanat sar pey liye tha
mein woh ism-e-azeem hoon jisko jin-o-malk ney sajda kiya tha
tu ney kyon mera haath na pakra mein jab rastey sey bhatka tha
jo paaya hai, woh tera hai, jo khoya hai woh bhi tera tha
mujh bin saari umr guzaari, log kahen gey tu mera tha
pahli baarish bhejney waley, mein terey darshan ka pyaasa tha

VERY BEAUTIFUL :flower1:

very sweet!!

Acha hai

Acha hai agar pahlay baat deete to acha tha.... aab kiya ho sakta hai...

Wonderful :k::k::k:
and Welcome to Poetry Forum :slight_smile:

thts soo lovely and sweet:k:

:k: zabur10 :slight_smile:

nice :k:

Tu ney kyooN mera hath nah pakrha
main jab rastey sey bhatka tha!

buhat khoob & welcome to poetry section ...

excellent and welcome to poetry section:)

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meney jab likhna seekha tha, pahley tera naam likha tha
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....
Keh teray naam say abteda kar raha honn!

Or aik or naam dil ka dil hi main reh jata hay ... (na koi rah na maznil na roshni ka suragh ... )