Main marna nahi chahta

Dilsay · August 30, 2003, 2:37pm

Main marna nahi chahta
Magar ay jan e hiyaat
Tum he bataoo kab tak apni sansoon ko
Jhoti tasali day kar joray rakh na hoo ga

By: Dilsay

Heart_To_Let · August 30, 2003, 3:01pm

Nice one,

jab tak marr nahi jaatay :)

Capricorn · August 30, 2003, 3:22pm

Re: Main marna nahi chahta

Impressing :k:

system · August 30, 2003, 3:58pm

Beautiful :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 30, 2003, 6:53pm

boht achay :k::k:

Amal · August 31, 2003, 1:11pm

Very touching indeed:k:…thanx for sharing this poem with us.

Muslim_Queen · September 1, 2003, 12:40pm

Re: Main marna nahi chahta

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Main marna nahi chahta
Magar ay jan e hiyaat
Tum he bataoo kab tak apni sansoon ko
Jhoti tasali day kar joray rakh na hoo ga

By: Dilsay
[/QUOTE]

Beautiful.

Dilsay · September 2, 2003, 11:50am

Thanks every one

Swera · September 3, 2003, 10:33pm

Nice....

but i think u can starach this make it a ghazal same title....or a nazam or perhapes a song!

plz do try it...if u don't min can I?

cuteepie · September 4, 2003, 12:57am

beautiful

chodhry · September 4, 2003, 11:35am

Re: Main marna nahi chahta

dilsay bhai bohat touchy hey…:k: keep it up

umeed24 · September 4, 2003, 12:43pm

nice,keep it up.

Galaxy · September 5, 2003, 2:12am

zabardast Dilsay

Glad to know ke you are still here. Hope mujhe bholey tu nahi hogey…well, kaafi dino ke baad wapsi hui and i can already notice some new guppies but oldies like Amal and Dilsay have always been there…:k: