maiN kyaa kahuN k mere dil ka varaq to saada thaa

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

KinaRa July 16, 2007, 9:18pm 1

vohi jhukii hu'ee beylaiNn vohi dareechaa thaa magar vo phuul-saa chehraa nazar na aataa thaa

maiN lauT aayaa huuN khaamoshiyo’n k sahraa se
vahaaN bhi teri sadaa kaa gubaar phailaa thaa

qareeb tair rahaa thaa batkoo’N kaa ek joraa
maiN aab’juu ke kinaare udaas baiThaa thaa

bani nahiN jo kahiN par kali ki turbat thi
sunaa nahiN jo kisi ne havaa ka nauhaa thaa

ye aa’rii tirchi lakeeraiN banaa gayaa hai kauN
maiN kyaa kahuN k mere dil ka varaq to saada thaa

udhar se baar’haa guzraa magar khabar na hu’ee
k zer-e-sang khunuk paaniyo’N kaa chashmaa thaa

vo us kaa aks-e-badan thaa k chaaNdni kaa kaNval
vo neeli jheel the yaa aasmaa’N kaa tukraa thaa

(Khunuk = cold)

Amal July 17, 2007, 2:40pm 2

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KinaRa achi ghazal hey :k: Thanx for sharing

SJ July 17, 2007, 3:49pm 3

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nice ghazal :)

Prince_Ali July 17, 2007, 3:57pm 4

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nice… :k:

Shab-e-Hijar July 17, 2007, 6:01pm 5

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nice ghazal kinara sis :)
kafi din badh ana huwa kasi hain?

GuL-e-Tasbeeh July 18, 2007, 11:03am 6

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very nice kinara:-)

The Random Thread

KinaRa July 18, 2007, 4:16pm 7

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shukria Amal sahib

KinaRa July 18, 2007, 4:17pm 8

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bohat shukria G-E-T...:)

KinaRa July 18, 2007, 4:18pm 9

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kinara tu yehi hoti ap he gaieb shaieb haiN :)
thanks

KinaRa July 18, 2007, 4:19pm 10

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thanks pa

KinaRa July 18, 2007, 4:20pm 11

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thanku sonia :)

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KinaRa July 25, 2007, 2:23pm 12

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:)

Shab-e-Hijar July 25, 2007, 5:14pm 13

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lo sun lo mai gaieb :halo: jub say amal nay time pass wala thread start kya
mai to idhar hi paye jati ho

NikamiJano July 25, 2007, 10:08pm 14

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sahb ap ki sirf siri yahan paa’e jati k paa’ey b yehi hotey

ullujii July 26, 2007, 3:56am 15

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very nice and beautyfull

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KinaRa July 26, 2007, 2:47pm 16

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oh ab yahaN ulu b bolnay lagay ye halat ho ga'ee poetry ki :p