Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain..!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Dhoop main chaaon, andheray main diya ho jana
Kitna mushkil hai kisi dukh ki dawa ho jana

Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain
Tum bhi us lamhay masroof-e-duwa ho jana

Aisa lagta hai ta’aluq nahi toota tujh say
Zakhm-e-dil ka teray dekhay say hara ho jana

Kabhi jub dhoop ki shiddat nay safar rok diya
Yaad aaya teray gaisoo ka ghata ho jana

‘Foz’ ab koo-e-malamat say guzarna hai mujhay
Tum kisi morr per chaho to juda ho jana!!!
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nice one lamhay jee

Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain
Tum bhi us lamhay masroof-e-duwa ho jana

wah wah :flower1:

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Re: Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain..!

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Originally posted by Lamhay: *
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Dhoop main chaaon, andheray main diya ho jana
Kitna mushkil hai kisi dukh ki dawa ho jana

Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain
Tum bhi us lamhay masroof-e-duwa ho jana

Aisa lagta hai ta'aluq nahi toota tujh say
Zakhm-e-dil ka teray dekhay say hara ho jana

Kabhi jub dhoop ki shiddat nay safar rok diya
Yaad aaya teray gaisoo ka ghata ho jana

'Foz' ab koo-e-malamat say guzarna hai mujhay
Tum kisi morr per chaho to juda ho jana!!!
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Tum kisi morr per chaho tu juda ho jaana...
Xcellent stuff, once again ... thanks for sharing Lamhay

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Re: Main kisi lamha-e-maqbool main maangoon ga tumhain..!

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Lamhay: *
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Dhoop main chaaon, andheray main diya ho jana
Kitna mushkil hai kisi dukh ki dawa ho jana**
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excellent! really enjoyed this first shair!

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Thanks Daagh , Amarbail and Zidee!

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wah......

kuch yaad aa giya.....may be isi ghazal ke houn ya kisi aur kay..!??

~ pehlay dekho tau sahi apnay karam ki wus`at
phir baray shouq se tum meray Khuda ho jaana

ab meray waastay taryaaq hai alhaad ka zehr
tum kisi aur pujaari kay Khuda ho jaana

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wah..
zabardast...

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Mehrtaab: *
wah......

kuch yaad aa giya.....may be isi ghazal ke houn ya kisi aur kay..!??

~ pehlay dekho tau sahi apnay karam ki wus`at
phir baray shouq se tum meray Khuda ho jaana

ab meray waastay taryaaq hai alhaad ka zehr
tum kisi aur pujaari kay Khuda ho jaana
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thanks mehartaab

I read it so i posted :) issliye itna hi maloom hai ..!

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gr8:k: