Main Jahan Tum Koo Bulata Hun Wahan Tak Aaoo...!!!

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

muddii January 1, 2008, 5:15am 1

Main Jahan Tum Koo Bulata Hun Wahan Tak Aaoo
Mairee Nazroon Say Guzar Kar Dil o Jaan Tak Aaoo

Phir Yeh Daikhoo Kay Zamanay Key Hawa Hai Kaisee
Saath Mairay Mairee Firdous e Jawaan Tak Aaoo

Taigh Key Tarah Chaloo Choor Kay Aaghoosh e Niyaam
Teer Key Tarah Say Aaghoosh e Kaman Tak Aaoo

Phool Kay Gird Phiroo Bagh Main Maannid e Naseem
Misl e Parvana Kisee Sham e Tapaan Tak Aaoo

Loo Woh Sadiyoun Kay Jahanum Key Haadain Khatm Hu_iin
Abh Hai Firdous He Firdous Jahan Tak Aaoo

Choor Kar Wayhum o Gumaan Husn e Yaqeen Tak Puhnchoo
Pur Yaqeen Say Bhee Kabhi Wayhum o Gumaan Tak Aaoo

Dushwari January 1, 2008, 5:17am 2

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very nice reversals in these lines, muddi.
great poem.
best,
Dushwari

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muddii January 1, 2008, 5:48am 3

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Yep its a very nice poem, I really loved it when I got across to it; and thank you for liking:)

deadsoul January 1, 2008, 1:23pm 4

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buhat khob

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bheegiyaad January 1, 2008, 4:13pm 5

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nice :k:

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muddii January 2, 2008, 4:11am 6

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Thank u:)

muddii January 2, 2008, 4:12am 7

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Thank u:)

NikamiJano January 2, 2008, 4:14am 8

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v nice muddi g :)

muddii January 2, 2008, 4:29am 9

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Thank u NJ:) Yeh Baatain keh yeh jo Stars hain yeh kaisay hasil kiay jaatay hain?

muddii January 3, 2008, 4:49am 10

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Lagta Hai Kuch Khass pasand nahee ayya loogon ko maira bulana:)

Sheal January 3, 2008, 7:03am 11

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nice sharing muddi :)

muddii January 3, 2008, 7:24am 12

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Thank u Sheal:)

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Jhanjharewali January 3, 2008, 11:24am 13

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i love this kind of poetry muddiji. the indian writer gulzar is very good at writing like this....in abstracts and in opposites. pls post more of this kind of poetry. its very....fulfilling. jaese ghar wapas aa gayen....u understand?

sunny_nicky January 3, 2008, 11:25am 14

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nice muddiii
main jjahan tum ko bulata ho wahan tak aoo

Jhanjharewali January 3, 2008, 11:27am 15

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*p.s. I tried to give u repu for this but they said i cant yet cos i jus gave u one for ur last post :p *

muddii January 3, 2008, 11:43am 16

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Hmmmmmm okay I will surely share some more poetry like this..............ok no problemz with the repo.......I know that you can't give it to the same person before spreading it around to some 50 persons............iss qayhat ur rijaal main kahan itnay achi post karanay walay miltay hain..... 50 is too much Admn's reduce it to around 10...................................nahee to kiya faida u just start giving repo to every this and that to cover 50 paces..............:)

muddii January 3, 2008, 11:44am 17

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Thank u sunny:)