Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Dania March 23, 2006, 5:35pm 1

Mein Jab Bhi Akeli Hoti Hoon, Tum Chupkey Se Aa Jatey Ho
Or Jhaank Kay Meri Aankhon Mein Beetay Din Yaad Dilatey Ho

Mastana Hawa Kay Jhonkon Se Har Baar Woh Pardey Ka Hilna
Pardey Ko Pakarney Ki Dhunn Mein Do Ajnabi Haatoun Ka Milna

Aankhon Mein Dhunwa Cha Jana Sasoun Mein Sitarey Se Khilna
Rasty Mein Tumhara Mur Mur Kar Takna Wo Mujhe Jatey Jatey

Aur Mera Thitak Kar Ruk Jaana, Chilman Kay Kareb Aatey Aatey
Nazroun Ka Taras Kar Reh Jaana, Ek Aur Jhalak Paatey Paatey

Baaloun Ko Sukhaney Ki Khatir, Kothey Pe Woh Mera Aa Jaana
Aur Tum Ko Muqabil Patey Hi Kuch Sharmana, Kuch Bal Khaana

Humsayon Kay Dar Se Katrana, Ghar Walon Kay Dar Se Ghabrana
Ro Ro Kay Tumhein Khat Likhti Hoon, Aur Khud ParDh Kar Ro Lati Hoon

Halaat Kay Taptey Toufaan Mein Jazbaat Ki Kashti Khayti Hoon
Kaisey Ho, Kahaan Ho, Kuch Tou Kaho, Mein Tum Ko Sadayien Deyti Hoon

Mein Jab Bhi Akeli Hoti Hoon, Tum Chupkey Se Aa Jatey Ho
Aur Jhaank Kay Meri Aankhoun Mein Beetay Dinn Yaad Dilatey

Prince_Ali March 23, 2006, 5:49pm 2

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

:k:

system March 23, 2006, 5:51pm 3

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Tum na yaad aou keh mein chaine say ji loun kuch din
Bach rahi hai jo zara si wo pei loun kuch din
Umar bhar chaak kia shoq say damaan e hayat
Abb yeh hasrat hai ken see loun kuch din.
..................
Zidagi tujh pay ab ilzam koi kia rakhay
Apna ihsaas hi aisa hai keh tanha rakhay.
....
Buhut khoob Dania

Dania March 23, 2006, 6:26pm 4

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

:)

system March 23, 2006, 6:41pm 5

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Hamaari jo un say thee guftagu wo khatam howee
Magar sakoot sa kuch darmian baqi hai
Abb aya teer chalanay ka fann to kia aya
Hamaray haath mein khaali kamaan baqi hai

Zamil March 23, 2006, 8:15pm 6

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Aaha Aaha. Is nazm ne to hila k rakh dia.
Sukoon loott lia dil ka. Kya kuch na phir gaya in aankon mein.....
Jio Daani !
8-]

I need a new avatar

Jhuki_Nigahein March 23, 2006, 9:31pm 7

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Aha very nice :)

being_lonely March 24, 2006, 12:12am 8

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

main kahan tha yeh nazm late parhi its such a piece of beauty.thx thx 4 sharing.asta lavista

darwesh March 24, 2006, 3:02am 9

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

Dania ji........khushbash,

Itna Romantic Geet...apne( toronto main baith kar)pura suna diya....subhanallah bari achhi yaaddasht hai apki, please , Film ka naam bhi bataen , aur saath hi kiss Mahrukh ne isse **
*parde par gaya tha...Awaaz to shaid Lata ji ki thi. *
**Aik bemisaal aur Lajawaab Naghma...Nawazish.

Dania March 24, 2006, 4:42pm 10

Re: Main Jab bhi akaili hotee hoon

:D acha tou yeh geet hai? mujhay nahi pata tha..main samjhee koi ghazal hai..bass achee lagee tou yahan par share karli..:)