~* Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon *~

Philanthrope · March 22, 2003, 8:21am

Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon Tumharay pyaar se nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Tumhari gali kay ilava bhi aur qarye hain
Jo iss diyaar se nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Tumharay hijir ki sadyaan, tumharay vasl kay din
Main iss shumaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Racha hua hai taira ishq mairi pooron main
Main iss khumaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Yeh maira jism kay matam sarae hasrat hai
Main iss mazar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Yeh mujh main kuon mairay raat din sambhalta hai
Iss ikhtiyar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Tumharay jism ki khushbo nay ker diya mehsorr
Iss aabshar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon

Yeh be-qarari mairi roh ka ujala hai
Main iss qarar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochoon…

BY:
Vasi Shah

BrokenSky · March 22, 2003, 10:12am

…

Dilsay · March 22, 2003, 12:08pm

Kiya baat hai jee..... masha Allah...

Azad · March 22, 2003, 1:58pm

khoob :k:
pharma begum ka zoohq acha hota ja raha hay

Man_de_Mouj · March 22, 2003, 6:06pm

Re: ~* Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon *~

what a sentimental piece, deep inside
Lovely Pharmacist...your choice is too good, unmatchable

Lamhay · March 22, 2003, 6:12pm

gr8 one pharma thanks 4 sharing siso!

MAREEZ_E_ISHQ · March 22, 2003, 6:34pm

khubsoorat indeed.

*ajab nahee ke hum issi hisaar ki khatar apnay par kaat daaltay hain aur jab rat-jagon k haar galay ki zeenat ban jaate hain tou is baat ka bari shidat se ahsaas hotaa hai ke zindagi mehz unki yaadon ka towaaf ban ke reh gayee hai.

hameshaa ki tarah purlutf:k: wasi shaha
and thanks for sharin chemist wali sahiba.*

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 23, 2003, 12:15am

kia naraz ho mujhe se:(
anyways excellent ghazal Pamacist sis:k::k:
thanks:)

_Passionate · March 23, 2003, 2:47am

excellent:k:

Paglee · March 23, 2003, 3:09am

:k: thanks 4 sharin..

Philanthrope · March 23, 2003, 6:38am

Broken Sky ... Thanks

Dilsay .... Shukriya

Azad ... Shukriya

Man de Mouj ... Thanks for the compliment...

Lamhay...Thanks sis

MAREEZ_E_ISHQ... Bohat achi tarhan aap nay alfaaz ko isstemal kia hai... shukriya pasandeedgi ka

ghazal kisi ke.... lolzzzz... array anhi bhi main koi naraz nahi tum say...aaise kia baat kerdi hai tum nay...yaar acctually I am bit busy these days because of my studies... tu InshaAllah tumhain pm karon gi jaise hi fursat mile gi ...Thanks for liking...

** &Passionate** .... Thanks Amber ...

Paglee... Thanks a lot...

Capricorn · March 23, 2003, 7:16am

Re: ~* Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon *~

Beautiful :k:

chand_chehra · March 23, 2003, 8:14am

Re: ~* Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon *~

:k:

Eastern_Thoughts · March 23, 2003, 9:49am

aaj tum mahafil-e-yaaraa.N pe ho maGaruur bahut
jab kabhii TuuT ke bikharoge to yaad aa_uu.Ngaa

Philanthrope · March 23, 2003, 7:45pm

Thanks Capricorn, Chand Chehra and Eastern Thoughts ...

sanctified · March 28, 2003, 8:18pm

nice :)

Amarbail1 · March 29, 2003, 10:13pm

its so beautiful, tell me you wrote it yourself?????

weteyes82 · March 30, 2003, 7:36am

[quote]
Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Tumharay pyaar se nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Tumhari gali kay ilava bhi aur qarye hain
Jo iss diyaar se nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Tumharay hijir ki sadyaan, tumharay vasl kay din
Main iss shumaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Racha hua hai taira ishq mairi pooron main
Main iss khumaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Yeh maira jism kay matam sarae hasrat hai
Main iss mazar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Yeh mujh main kuon mairay raat din sambhalta hai
Iss ikhtiyar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Tumharay jism ki khushbo nay ker diya mehsorr
Iss aabshar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon
Yeh be-qarari mairi roh ka ujala hai
Main iss qarar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochoon...
BY:
Vasi Shah
[/quote]

well beautiful! its always a delight to read wasi.............
He's such famous young poet in pakistan specially because of his kangan....and has a no of beautiful ghazals in his debut book "Ankhein bhiig jaati hain"

tunhaara naam likne kii ijaazat Chhin gai jab se
koi bhi lafz liktaa houn tu Ankhein bhig jaati hain!

Khanzada · March 30, 2003, 11:04am

Re: ~* Main iss hisaar say nikloon tu aur kuch soochon *~

Bauhat khoob! :k:

I believe in the last sher, it should be mas-hoor and not mehsoor. Please check and thanks for sharing.

Philanthrope · March 30, 2003, 3:22pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Amarbail: *
its so beautiful, tell me you wrote it yourself?????
[/QUOTE]
Nope Amarbail ...this is Vasi Shah's poetry... not mine..
Thanks for liking :~)

Thanks sanctified & weteyes82

Khanzada ...thats Mehsoor... I have just checked it
b/w Thanks for liking