maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Koyal June 19, 2005, 4:20am 1

maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka
ganwa k b maiN tujhay tuj se door jaa na saka

pahar tha dosra shaab ka k dosri thei saa’dee
aazaab-e-hijar ne pocha tu maiN bata na sakaa

kamaN khench k bethay they taa’k maiN meri
jahaN gaya maiN hawadas se jaa’n bacha na saka

chiraag jalta raha aa’s ka saa’da dil maiN
kisi shikast ka jhoonka isay bhuja na saka

qalam se bhrta raha zakham ik zamnay ka
qalam k zakham zamnay ko par suna na saka

wo zindghi ki gazal thei k moat ka noo’ha
teray begaier koi dhun b gun’guna na saka

Golden_Scorpion_1 June 19, 2005, 6:31am 2

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Wah...!! :)

Very Nice MAMOON ;)

Shab-e-Hijar June 19, 2005, 7:04am 3

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beautifull :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR June 19, 2005, 11:25am 4

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

Boht achay :k:

HOW WELL HAS PAKISTAN DONE?

system June 19, 2005, 1:16pm 5

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

very nice :k:

Aryaan June 19, 2005, 2:59pm 6

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Bohat khoob Koyal…

Amal June 19, 2005, 8:20pm 7

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

Koyal bohat achi ghazal hey:k:…thanx for sharing this ghazal with us :~)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 20, 2005, 11:02am 8

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Very nice Koyal Ji:-)

_Masoom_Muskaan June 20, 2005, 1:59pm 9

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:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke June 20, 2005, 6:35pm 10

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very nice =))

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:17am 11

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

thanks Golden baji kahan paa’ee jati haiN ap aj kal

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:18am 12

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

thanks shabo fursat mil gaye ap ko

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:19am 13

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

thanks heartu kesi haiN ap:)

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:20am 14

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

thanks vivo:)

~* Happy Birth Day KhamoshNigahein *~

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:21am 15

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thanks Aryaan..

ullujii June 26, 2005, 3:22am 16

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Awesome.. :)

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:28am 17

Re: maiN dasht-e-dil se teray naqsh-e paa mita na saka

shukria Amal

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:38am 18

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kon?

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:39am 19

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thanks Gul:)

Koyal June 26, 2005, 3:39am 20

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