Main Darti Hoon........

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
ULFAT KI SARI BAATOON SE
INTEZAR MAIN JO KAT JATI HAIN
AYSI HI SARI RATOON SE

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
MOHABBAT KE SAB KHAYALOON SE
TUT KAR JO BIKHAR JATE HAIN
AYSE SAB KHAWABOON SE

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
MAZBOOT BANDHONOON KI DORI SE
JO MINTOON MAIN TUT JATI HAI
ZARA ZARA SI BAATOON SE

          HAAN

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON

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very good except for the mintoon wali line..
takes away from the poetic effect.

3

Bahut khoob !

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wah ji wah bhut khoob:k:

5

Agree with you. Otherwise its a nice poem :k:

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Nice one!

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Re: Main Darti Hoon........

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by umeed24: *
MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
ULFAT KI SARI BAATOON SE
INTEZAR MAIN JO KAT JATI HAIN
AYSI HI SARI RATOON SE

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
MOHABBAT KE SAB KHAYALOON SE
TUT KAR JO BIKHAR JATE HAIN
AYSE SAB KHAWABOON SE

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
MAZBOOT BANDHONOON KI DORI SE
JO MINTOON MAIN TUT JATI HAI
ZARA ZARA SI BAATOON SE

          HAAN

MAIN DARTI HOON,MAIN DARTI HOON
[/QUOTE]

zabar10

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ab itnah bhei na darho :hehe:
btw nice:)

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:) nice

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Beautiful:k:…thanx for sharing:)

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nice:k: