Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

[Sheal]

Teray dostoon main hooN keh teray dushmanoon maiN hooN
Teray qareeb aakay bari uljhanooN maiN hooN
Aay yar khush diyar tujhay kia khaber
Main kab say udaasiyooN kay ghanay junglooN maiN hooN
Badla na meray baad bhi mozoo - e- guftgoo
MaiN ja chuka hoon phir bhi teri mehfilooN maiN hooN
Mujh say guraiz pa hai to her rasta badal
MaiN sang - e - rah hooN to sabhi rastooN maiN hooN
Mujh say bichar kay roay ga tu bhi umer bhar
Yay sooch lay keh maiN bhi teri khwahishooN maiN hooN

[AQ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

what an amazing imagery :k:

I like the following two the most…

Badla na meray baad bhi mozoo - e- guftgoo
**MaiN ja chuka hoon phir bhi teri mehfilooN maiN hooN
**
Mujh say guraiz pa hai to her rasta badal
**MaiN sang - e - rah hooN to sabhi rastooN maiN hooN **:~)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

words samg nehe ae leken theme boht achha leg reha he :)

[NikamiJano]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@Anwaar Qureshi

what an amazing imagery :k:

I like the following two the most…

Badla na meray baad bhi mozoo - e- guftgoo
**MaiN ja chuka hoon phir bhi teri mehfilooN maiN hooN
**
Mujh say guraiz pa hai to her rasta badal
**MaiN sang - e - rah hooN to sabhi rastooN maiN hooN **:~)

yahan tu ksi shaa’eR ka name nahi likha ..jawab dahi k laeay haazar ho he gay’ey na

nice one sheal

[AQ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@NikamiJano

yahan tu ksi shaa’eR ka name nahi likha ..jawab dahi k laeay haazar ho he gay’ey na

I know the name of the poet already… jinn kaa pataa naheen hota, unn kaa poochtaa hooN

PS: I do not remember the name though currently. Nikammi jee, can you please, remind me the name

[NikamiJano]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@Anwaar Qureshi

I know the name of the poet already… jinn kaa pataa naheen hota, unn kaa poochtaa hooN

PS: I do not remember the name though currently. Nikammi jee, can you please, remind me the name

ogo tu sha’er bhi JIN honay lagay ab pata nahi tha:p ap ko dekh andaza tu tha peR

oh ap ka naan i guess Anwar Qureshi ab dosRay namoon ka nahi pata

[AQ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@NikamiJano

ogo tu sha’er bhi JIN honay lagay ab pata nahi tha:p ap ko dekh andaza tu tha peR

oh ap ka naan i guess Anwar Qureshi ab dosRay namoon ka nahi pata

jinn ko choRo… yeh bataao.,. tum meraY naanoN par kiouN nazar jaamaye beThi ho.. nadeedi

[redidentity]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

Beautiful..

[deep_ocean]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

Amazing

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@_Masoom_Muskaan

words samg nehe ae leken theme boht achha leg reha he

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

wah gi very nice :k: i like it

[Shumaisa]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

V. Niceee.. :k:

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@Shab-e-Hijar

me ko urdu nehe ate

[AQ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@_Masoom_Muskaan

me ko urdu nehe ate

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@Anwaar Qureshi

me ko urdu nehe ate ho seke to ap sikha do
sekha nehe sekte to ek dictionary hee la do

[AQ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@_Masoom_Muskaan

me ko urdu nehe ate ho seke to ap sikha do
sekha nehe sekte to ek dictionary hee la do

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

me ko urdu nehe ate ho seke to ap sikha do sekha nehe sekte to ek dictionary hee la do :D

urdu ki dictionary dekh kar jo ati hai thori bohat woh bhi bhool jaye gi :p

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

@Anwaar Qureshi

ziada na hasein:halo:

@Shab-e-Hijar

urdu ki dictionary dekh kar jo ati hai thori bohat woh bhi bhool jaye gi

muge serf alif be te ate he

[SJ]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

Awesome Sharing Sheal:)
keep sharing

[Sheal]

Re: Main Bhi Teri Khawahishoon Main Hoon

thanks all of you :)