main.......aur tum......

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Us suraj kae naam,jis nae aik lamhay ko hi sahi, mujhe zindagi ki herarat sae roohshanas kara diya…

MAIN…
main tu sirf mitee hoon,
bewajood hastee hoon
natawan-o-bemaya
kum-naseeb dhartee hoon,

dhool matee ko yeh ziya dae kar,
khush!! fareb-e-nazar main rahtee hoon
zard kirnoon sae rooshni lae kar
aik jadoo asar main rahtee hoon
aapnae mehwar ki qaed main reh kar
SIRF TAERAE SAFAR MAIN RAHTEE HOON,

AUR TUM…
chand ka sitaroon ka,noor ki baharoon ka,
sub qeyam tum sae hai
badaloon ki wuosat ka,musamoon ki shidat ka,
yeh nizam tum sae hai
mouj’zaae-e-qudrat ki,bemesaal rehmat ka,
fiaz-e-aam tum sae hai
qarwan-e-hastee main, zindagi ki ronek ka,
ahtamam tum sae hai
kum-naseeb dhartee ki musta’ar sansoon ka,
intezam tum sae hai

       AAE MAERAE MEHAR-E-MUNAWAR 
               SADA QAIUM RAHOO
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Bohat achay...

Itna sach behi na bolo ka zamana dushman hoo jaya....

aapnae mehwar ki qaed main reh kar
SIRF TAERAE SAFAR MAIN RAHTEE HOON,

Khuda karay ke jis kay liya aap safar kar rahee hain wo aap ka humsafar hoo... Ya dua ha aur allaha karay ka ya kabool hoo...

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nice :)

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beautiful...:)

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nice:)...

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thanks Dilsay
nikii
and passionate
and broken sky, thanks a lot.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Bohat achay...

Itna sach behi na bolo ka zamana dushman hoo jaya....

aapnae mehwar ki qaed main reh kar
SIRF TAERAE SAFAR MAIN RAHTEE HOON,

Khuda karay ke jis kay liya aap safar kar rahee hain wo aap ka humsafar hoo... Ya dua ha aur allaha karay ka ya kabool hoo...
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thanks dilsay, yeh sach mujhe kaheen ka nahin rahnae deta........

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *

thanks dilsay, yeh sach mujhe kaheen ka nahin rahnae deta........
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Kuch batain zindagee guzarnay ke liya zaroori behi hooteen hain...

Kuch adhoore yaadain
Khch adhooray lafz

Siraf ak galat qadam utha tha rahay shook main
Manzail tamam umer mujahay dhoond tee rahee

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nice:k:

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Re: main…aur tum…

Amazing stuff:k:…thanx for sharing

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VERY NICE !!:k:

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bohut khoob:k::k:

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Re: Re: main…aur tum…

thanks Amal,You know what ?? this might be good…since this is the first time,YOU thought so !!!.. welcome on this thread, and thanks a lot.

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thanks, ghazal kise ki
tutu and jaan lewaa,
Thank you, lovely people all of you are wonderful.

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Re: main.......aur tum......

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
Us suraj kae naam,jis nae aik lamhay ko hi sahi, mujhe zindagi ki herarat sae roohshanas kara diya......

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Suraj nay
kisi ko adhoora nahi choora
har ak ko puri hararat dee hai...
aap ko agar ya hararat
aab mahsoos howee hai
Tu is hararat ko apnay pass
rakh loo
ya sooch kar ka zindgee ke sard ratoon main
bohat kam aya gee
kisi puri yaad ke taraha

*(Dilsay) *

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Very Nice,Thanks for sharing :)

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Re: Re: Re: main…aur tum…

Thanx a lot for giving so importance to my opinion:flower1:

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Re: Re: main.......aur tum......

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Suraj nay
kisi ko adhoora nahi choora
har ak ko puri hararat dee hai...
aap ko agar ya hararat
aab mahsoos howee hai
Tu is hararat ko apnay pass
rakh loo
ya sooch kar ka zindgee ke sard ratoon main
bohat kam aya gee
kisi puri yaad ke taraha

*(Dilsay) *
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thanks dilsay ,,aaj kya phir fajar ki namaz parhee thee........

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Re: Re: Re: Re: main…aur tum…

its not the issue of giving importance, everyone on the forum KNOWS …You are IMPORTANT, a VITAL part of this forum, remmember… that POET OF THE YEAR CONTEST…

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Bahut khoob kaha aap ne apne suraj ke liye :k::k::k:

Thanks for sharing AG :slight_smile: