main aur mayri tanhai

Princess_Fiona · October 22, 2005, 2:58am

Hi guys once again Attia is sharing one of her fav poems with u guys.. ofcourse from my dairy/diary i know many of u might have heard aur for ppl who havent heard it hope u guys will like it

Rehtey hain saath saath mai aur meri tanhai
Kartey hain raaz ki baat mai aur meri tanhai

Din to guzar hi jata hai logon ki bheer mai
Kartey hain basar raat main meri tanhai

Saanson ka kya bharosa kab chor jain saath
Laikin rahain gay saath main aur meri tanhai

Aaye na tumhe yaad kabhi bhul kar bhi hum
Kartey hain tumhe yaad main aur meri tanhai

Aa ke paas kyon door ho gaye hum se
Kartey hain teri talash main aur meri tanhai

Tum ko rakhain gay saath zeenat bana kay ghar ki
Reh jain phir na tanha main aur meri tanhai

fayax · October 22, 2005, 3:40am

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Pretty good. Your work ?

Princess_Fiona · October 22, 2005, 1:59pm

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^ u think i can write such a poem
nahi jee not my work but one of my fav ones

Golden_Scorpion_1 · October 23, 2005, 5:33am

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Nice one Attia

Black_Scorpion · October 23, 2005, 8:45am

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very nice

Princess_Fiona · October 23, 2005, 9:08pm

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thanks guys for liking it :)

FrozenFire · October 24, 2005, 12:52am

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wah wah...zabardast attia

Princess_Fiona · October 24, 2005, 12:55am

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^ thanks dear :)

saroo · October 24, 2005, 8:31am

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Good one ..

ghazel_rizvi · October 24, 2005, 9:01am

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it,s good attia wasy zayada nahe hey kuch ya tanhai take care

Precious_Khan · October 24, 2005, 9:16am

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nice,,,,waisay lagta hay mujhay apna naam tanhai rakhna parrayga:D

FOBulous · October 24, 2005, 3:16pm

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awesome...absolutely loved it..my fav lines:

Saanson ka kya bharosa kab chor jain saath
Laikin rahain gay saath main aur meri tanhai

Aaye na tumhe yaad kabhi bhul kar bhi hum
Kartey hain tumhe yaad main aur meri tanhai.

Ajnabi4ever · October 24, 2005, 4:08pm

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Thanks for sharing..Attia Jee

But I like this one

Phirtay hain kub saay dur badar
Kabhi iss nagar ab uss nagar
ik dosraay kay hamsafar
main aur meri Awaargee..
Na ashna hur rahghuzar
Na meharban sub kee nazar
Jain tuo jain Ab kidhar
main aur meri Awaarge

Ik din milli ik nazneen
Dil nay kaha hum ko wahain
Khaboon kee duniya hai yahiab
Phir youn hoya woh kho gai
Aur mujh ko zid see ho gai
Lain gaay iss ko dhoond ker
Main aur meri Awaarge

Shukria

Princess_Fiona · October 24, 2005, 7:10pm

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bohat khob.. but awaragaee is used for guys while tanhai is used for girl.. i was talking from a girl’s prespective while u from a guys prespective

Princess_Fiona · October 24, 2005, 7:11pm

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janu if u think.. tanhai is always ur best friend.. ak lamba mehfil may ho to.. dosray kaee lamhay tum aur tumhari tanhai hogee

Princess_Fiona · October 24, 2005, 7:12pm

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nahi please..
dont make me run away from my tanhai too

Princess_Fiona · October 24, 2005, 7:13pm

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and **saro and Fabulous **thanks for liking it :)

Precious_Khan · October 25, 2005, 10:20am

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waisay jab main apna naam tanhai rakh loonga to tum apni tanhai ka naam badal kar SHAHNAI rakh layna

Princess_Fiona · October 25, 2005, 1:11pm

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^ very funny ay

ghazel_rizvi · October 27, 2005, 8:28am

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well i love my tanahi u too?