Raton ko uth kr
Khyalon sy ho kr
Yadon mn kho kr
Tmhay kia khbar hy
Mn apny KHUDA sy
Kia mangta hn
Viranon mn ja kr
Daman phla kr
Aanso bha kr
Tmhn kia khbr he
Mn apny KHUDA se
Kia mangta hn
Tm to kho gy
SANAM mangta hn
JANAM mangta hn
Tm to kho gy
Kisi DILRUBA ki
Kisi DILNASHIN ki
wafa mangta hn
Ye b galat he
Wo b galat hy
Mn apny khuda se
“ADAM” k betay ki
Ankhon sy jati
HAYA mangta hn
Mn apny KHUDA se
“HAWWA” ki beti k
Sr sy utarti
RIDA mangta hn
rajey
November 7, 2009, 9:43am
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Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
nice meanings!
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Thnax rajey.....:)
Aryaan
November 8, 2009, 4:31am
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Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Bohat Khoob Bilbatori ...
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
yeah kya hai ...... is pe mai kya compliment dooo ....
mai to apne khuda se ...
is larki ki
jatii hui ...
akal wapise mangta hoo .......
haha
yeah kya hai ...... is pe mai kya compliment dooo ....
mai to apne khuda se ...
is larki ki
jatii hui ...
akal wapise mangta hoo .......
haha
R me usi Khuda sy.....
Iss banday k liye
Akal k istimal ki....
dua mangti hn
Actully iss ghzl mn jo bat poshida hy wo akal mandon k liye hy....na k akal band logon k liye.....:p
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
mrea khuday
tum jaisoo ki nhi sunta ...
jayoo sabash ja k mau dhoo kr ayoo ...
yeah mau or masoorr ki daalllll...
LP
November 8, 2009, 1:11pm
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Re: Main Apny Khuda sy…
awwwwwwwwwwww
V V V Nice
I it bil
sachi muchi mai i it
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy…
Thanxxx LP:hugz: sooooo sweet:)
Aye gafil insaan,
Wo mra Khuda hy…
koi firoon nhi…
jo srf tm jaison ki sunnay ga…:shoaby:
Wo to bss zaate bartar hy…wo ALEM hy…Wo Kareem hy…hehe
KKF
November 8, 2009, 3:59pm
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Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
mujeh yeh nazm bahooot pasand aayii...end zabardast hai...kis Khoobsoorti se aajkal ke fitne kii taraf ishaaraa kiyaa hai. yaad rahe k bahtareen du'aa vo hai jo apne liye na ho aur na hii kisi jaannewaale yaa kisi munfarid shaKhsiyat ke liye na ho bal k awaam un naas kii falaaH aur bahbood ke liye ho...aameen
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Aaap ki taazim ka shukria Asmani sahb.....Me aap k knowledge sy bht mustfeed hoi hn(really)....aap asi e achi baton sy hmain agah krty rha krayn...Adab arz hy
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Boht khoob
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
kha nah woh mra RAB hai .... woh bas mrii sune ga
chal hun tang nah krrr.....
tang kere gi malanga nu ...te kuute pay gayee teri tanga noo .. hehe
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
nice poem & wht a deep dscussion between u & sarmad.
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Nice poetry... one of mY fav...!
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
Thnxxxxxxxxxx Shazia, Tery_nam & IL.......
thnx evry body excpt KHush feham log(Sarmad shb smgh ty gay hon gy)
kha nah woh mra RAB hai .... woh bas mrii sune ga
chal hun tang nah krrr.....
tang kere gi malanga nu ...te kuute pay gayee teri tanga noo .. hehe
Billayan ko chichron k khwab...
Ty GS man malango ka kia kam???
Tusi chlo darbar ty.....shabash
Re: Main Apny Khuda sy......
acha kha likha hai .. k gs pe malangoo ka aana mana hai ...
das nah minu ???