Main Abhi Talak Na Samjha Mujhe Tujh Se Pyar Kion Hai..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity November 27, 2007, 7:26am 1

Aik Ghazal,

Main Abhi Talak Na Samjha Mujhe Tujh Se Pyar Kion Hai
Teray Wastay Mera Dil, Jo Hai Be’qaraar Kion Hai

Mujhe Chhor Ke Yuun Tanha Tuu Kab Ka Ja Chuka Hai
Tou Hain Raah Pe Kion Nazrain, Tera Intezaar Kion Hai

Tuu Jo Hamsafar Tha Mera Tou Dhuan Dhuan Tha Mausam
Tuu Jo Sath Main Nahi Hai Tou Ye Inteshaar Kion Hai

Meri Aankhon Ki Udaasi Tuu Kabhi Bhi Parh Na Paaya
Mujhe Ye Samajh Na Aaya, Tera Aitbaar Kion Hai

Teray Wastay Mera Dil Kion Dharak Raha Hai Abb Tak
Meri Saanso’n Pe Jo Tera, Ye Hai Ikhtiaar Kion Hai

(Ahmer, October 25, 2007)

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

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SJ November 27, 2007, 8:09am 2

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Awesome Ahmer:k:
Full Marks miltay hain app ko:)

Shab-e-Hijar November 27, 2007, 5:42pm 3

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wow very nice wasy kis ki zameen par likhi hai

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bheegiyaad November 27, 2007, 5:55pm 4

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very well said :k:

redidentity November 28, 2007, 4:46am 5

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aap sab ka buhat shukria :)

PS: Shab jee ye ghazal Saad Ullah Shah ki zameen pe hai.. jis ka radeef** 'Kion Hai'**

Prince_Ali November 28, 2007, 5:31am 6

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wah Ahmer bhai! bohut a’al :k:

Dushwari November 28, 2007, 5:32am 7

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Ahmer,

very nice poem.
best,

Dushwari

Shumaisa November 28, 2007, 6:44am 8

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Wow Bohatt khoob..

redidentity November 28, 2007, 7:12am 9

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aadaab arz hai :)

Sannan November 28, 2007, 8:47am 10

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Tuu Jo Hamsafar Tha Mera Tou Dhuan Dhuan Tha Mausam
Tuu Jo Sath Main Nahi Hai Tou Ye Inteshaar Kion Hai

**Ahmer remaining things are fine but first She'r Dhuan Dhuan key bajay kuch aur use karo yaar ....... Dhuan Dhuan aur Inteshaar mil naheen pa rahin hain .......

anyway nice effort **

redidentity November 28, 2007, 9:11am 11

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hey thnx Sannan for corrective effort..

i actually wanted to say k jab tumharay sath honay se bhi dhuaan dhuaan mausam tha.. sab kuch dhundla sa.. to janay k baad bey chaini aur inteshar kion hai..

Sannan November 28, 2007, 9:22am 12

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**I got your point but still wants you to change wordings … **

redidentity November 28, 2007, 9:36am 13

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umm.. suggest please..

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deadsoul November 28, 2007, 11:12am 14

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buhat khob ahmer
zabardast

chacha_Ghalib November 28, 2007, 4:14pm 15

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bohat khoob

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tum_bin_1 November 28, 2007, 5:25pm 16

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Zabardast ghazal Ahmer :)

redidentity November 29, 2007, 7:30am 17

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buhat buhat shukria DS, chacha_ghalib n tum_bin :)