mai kon hon????

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ye zindagi ki raat jab

saher ki na naveed day

na koi gham ka sath ho

na sukh ki chaon ho kahin

na haath mai meray baqa

na ikhtiyar e fanaa,

na maan chahi ho arzoo

jo mil gaya wo bay saba

jo na mila “naseeb hai”

jo ankh nam ho hans paron

tu muskurahatain hon nam

mai sochti hon tab kabhi…

MAI KON HON???..
MAI KON HON??

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Mohtarema...Aap Rabiya Rana Hain...Qasam Se.

Aur Nazm Bhi Umda Hai.... Keep it Up !

Darwesh

Who did Adam and Eve's children marry?
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jee han Darweesh mai Rabia Rana hi hon.is mai qasam khanay ki kia bat hay.............kuch samjh nahi aya..
thanx k app nay pasand ki meri nazm

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very nice

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Really Darwesh Bhi Khariat ????? Aap ko yaqeen keon naheen aaya ????

Rabia once again u've written some nice nazam .... mujhay aik baat yaad aa gai kah kissi nay kia khoub kaha ....

"Main Kabhi Lajwab Naheen Howa ! Leekan Jub Uss Nay Pocha Tou Koun Hay ???"

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Rabia Tum kon ho tum kon ho
kuch khaab si mujhko lagti ho
samundar ki gehrai ho
ya mehtaab ki parchaai
shaam ki tanhai ho ya
subh ki purwaai
tum kon ho tum kon ho
pyar bhara geet ho
ya jeewan ka sangeet
jo bhi ho jahan bhi ho
tum apni apni lagti ho :~)
i think kuch zeyada likh diya.... anyhow baat sey baat nikal aai, i want to sey buhat achi poem hay, thanks a lot for sharing:~)

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thax Gul..mai kuch nahi bas aik a'am si larki hon.....
n thanx all of u frnds

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Sannan sb ap ko poetry ka shok to ha bt ap aksar sher galat likta o
Main sirf ak bar Lajwab Howa !
Jub Uss Nay kaha kon ho tm
ths is the real sher n han larki k lia HIS nai HER likhta hain ya galti ap na kahan ki khud dhond k corection kr li gia hav a nice enemy

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Hamin yeh yaqeen nahi a rha hy ky yeh apny sharo gup shup ky ghalib Derwash Hain:D*Kab loty?*

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R Rana :k:

hi how r u ? kidhar hai ap ?

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buhat aaaachay

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Buhat acchi!

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hiii rabiya :wave: how r u … thts nice …how 's ur life going …
u never shown up there @ hotmail … hmmm …koi narazgee haiii kiyaaa msn messenger saay yaa kiseee aur say ..tht u don t com there hmm

a slippery thread
a slippery thread
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nice one

Lets do it. Lets hit 3m posts in cafe
Lets do it. Lets hit 3m posts in cafe
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***i m fine n thanx 4 complements but i hvnt identify u…who r u??:hmmm: ***