mahnat.kashoN ke ...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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aadaab, dosto!

Ghazal

**mahnat.kashoN ke , dost! jahaaN bhii qadam gaye
KhushiyaaN simat ke aayiiN, zamaane ke Gham gaye

azm-e-safar kiyaa to iraade hue javaaN
amvaaj-e-tund ruk gayiiN, tuufaan tham gaye

jur.at ke aage sail-e-havaadis kii kyaa bisaat!
ham ne jahaaN bhii paaoN jamaaye so jam gaye

ham haiN jo aaRe vaqt meN seena.sipar hue
aayii vatan pe aaNch to maqtal meN ham gaye

ye bhii ajeeb baat hai, ai paikar-e-jamaal!
nikle jo terii bazm se, baa.chashm-e-nam gaye

jab bhii :Mazaq: aayii hai daar-o-rasan kii baat
ahl-e-kunisht aaye na ahl-e-haram gaye !!!**

**‘Mazaq’ Charkharivi **

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Veryy nice..:k:

thanks for sharing :flower1:

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bouhat achay…:k:

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very nicee...

ye kis ke poem thee koi dost g?poet's name?

or ak or bat agar apkay pas ya kisi or member k pas ye ghazal hai to plz zaror share karaay:)
plzzz:(

                      'zindagi main to sabhii pyar kia kartay hain
                       main to marr k b meri jaan tujhay chahoon ga..
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Re: mahnat.kashoN ke …

does anyone here know the meaning of this word? :halo:

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Re: Re: mahnat.kashoN ke …

use ur brain and u’ll get it :halo:

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Re: Re: Re: mahnat.kashoN ke …

since you’re so smart, why don’t u tell me? err infact, please don’t bother. This question is not meant for you :stuck_out_tongue:

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amvaj-e-tund.. 12 saal k bachay ko bhe pata ho ga is ka meaning:rolleyes: u suck :stuck_out_tongue:

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amvaj-e-tund.. 12 saal k bachay ko bhe pata ho ga is ka meaning u suck
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I could care less about some 12 year old kid :p i'm only concerned with my vocabulary. vaise bhi, fiker mat karo.. mujhey is nazm main kafi words ki samjh nahein aye.. but this word somehow caught my attention :D

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ja ker urdu dictionary khol luu mil jaye ga meaning is word ka aur baQiyon ka bhee:smack:

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u’ve just proved that you don’t know the meaning of this word :rolleyes:

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Thanx HH Jee :),AsSweet !

momo02 i think main nay Poet ka naam likha hai End Main or Ghazal pasand karne ka Shukriya :slight_smile:

Sharafat_ka_Namouna sir jee :amvaaj: is plural of :mauj:. I hope you can understand the meaning of the misraa now :slight_smile: …

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oh shut up yaara.. i know the meaning of this word.. my urdu vocabulary is not that poor :rolleyes:

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hamain to koi lift he nai karata hai g:( kisiiiii ko agar ye ghazal

('zindagi main to sabhii pyar kia kartay hain
main to marr k b meri jaan tujhay chahoon ga..)

aatiiiii hai to
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likh day :(
kisi ko to atti hogi na mujhay chahye bohat zaroriiiiiii

oh plzzzzz:(:(

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bohat khoob :~)

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see HH, now here’s a sensible person :stuck_out_tongue:

well actally I’m also confused about that tund part.. but I do have some idea now. Thanks :smiley:

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Originally posted by ** Vivacious ***: *
bohat khoob :~)
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Thanx VV :)