mahak jaoon ga

[sunny_nicky]

mahak jaooN ga
teri aaghosh main aaya to mahak jaoon ga
jo uthi mojh to aanchal pe jhalak jaoon ga

na mujhe chorh ke jane ki saza dena kabhi
dil main ik hook uthe gi main bilak jaoon ga

dekh labraiz na kar thehre howe saghar ko abhi
apni rahoon se yaqeen hai ke bahek jaoon ga

hon main aawara bhatakta howa raahi laikin
teri aankhooN main samaya to chamak jaoon ga

de ke aawaz zaraa dekh le “Arsoo” ko kabhi
goonj maddham na parhe gi ke lapak jaooN ga

[bheegiyaad]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

:k: nice

[sunny_nicky]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

thx

[chacha_Ghalib]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

is it really your own?

if so its brilliant :k:

[sunny_nicky]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

nahe parosiyon ki haii :(

waqai chacchhaaaa hoo tumm :P

[chacha_Ghalib]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

parosiyon say pooch kay post ki hai phir?

seemed too good for a new poet... take it as a compliment :)

[sunny_nicky]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

:)

[Azad]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

teri aaghosh main aaya to mahak jaoon ga
jo uthi mojh to aanchal pe jhalak jaoon ga

Wah :k:

[sunny_nicky]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

thx azad

[Jhanjharewali]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

wow sunny...superb! i wish i cud write like this

[Azad]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

hon main aawara bhatakta howa raahi laikin
teri aankhooN main samaya to chamak jaoon ga

yeh bhi acha hay :k:

[fizatiq]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

very nice

[zkq06]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

wow its amazing i reallly like it

[Ahmi]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

Bohat khoob...Sunny...

[pk786]

Re: mahak jaoon ga

very nice