magar woh saath ho to phir bhala bhala safar lagay

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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bhali si aik shakl thee ,bhali si us ki dosti…
na yeh keh Husn-e-Taam ho, Na dekhnay may aam si
na youn keh jub chalay to kahkashaan si rahguzar lagay…
magar woh saath ho to phir bhala bhala safar lagay
Koi bhee rut ho us ki chub fiza ka rung roop thee…
woh gurmioon ki chauon thee woh surdeeoon ki dhoop thee
so aik roz kia hua wafa pur behes chirh gai…
wo ishq ko amar kahoon maiN us zid say chirh gai
wo ishq ka aseer tha maiN ishq ko qafas kahay..
ke umr bhur kay saath ko woh buddtar-az havas kahay
na us ko mujh pay naaz tha no mujh ko us pay zaum hi..
Jo ahed hi koi na ho to kia ghum-e-shikastgee
so apna apna raasta hunsi khushi badal deea..
Wo apni raah chul parhi may apni raah chul deea
bhali si aik shakl thee bhali si us ki dosti..
ab us ki yaad raat din nahi magar kabhi kabhi

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nikami bajie mei ap kei sath hu to safr kesei lagei ga ;)

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Re: magar woh saath ho to phir bhala bhala safar lagay

I wonder how difficult is it to write a line unique
like this. I wish after the hardwork of my full
lifetime, I could also write something like this
single line that seem so simple, yet says everything
which is impossible for me to say in my own words.

Apart from this feeling of incapability, NikamiJi is
khoobsoorat nazm ke leeye be’inteha shukriya:flower1: :slight_smile:

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sighh…you surely mish me a lot :smiley:

beautiful :flower1:

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Beautiful Nazm, Thanks for sharing NJ sis:)

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Very Nice Selsction NJ....
Aaap kay leay " White Tulips " , looking good :)

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Look at these!

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very nice jano gi :k:

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:k:
bhut hi khoobsourt :slight_smile:
thxs 4 sharing :slight_smile:

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hmmm Good

May B Super Glue Laga hoya hooo :O)

hahahaha

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by *Masoom Muskaan: *
nikami bajie mei ap kei sath hu to safr kesei lagei ga ;)
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mashoom g ap chalo tu pata chal jaiey gha k kesa rahya gha..ap himat karo chalnay ki..;)

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Re: Re: magar woh saath ho to phir bhala bhala safar lagay

thanks Amal…wesay Amal shai kaha hai na ap ne aj kla kahin formalities main tu har gazal ki tareaf nahi kar rahya ap k kahin Aik aur ne dedicate karna par jaiey…:)…fiker na karen aik he sahi hai abhi jab aur dedicate karna ho tu bata dijiey gha…wo na ho marey khishi k komay main chalay jain :wink:

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Asi abhi taak ap ko yaad haiN…wesay btw Beautiful who?

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Eastern Thoughts: *

Very Nice Selsction NJ....
Aaap kay leay " White Tulips " , looking good :)

[thumb=A]whiteTulip1.JPG[/thumb]

Look at these!

[thumb=A]whiteTulip21.JPG[/thumb]
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thanks Eastren ap ne hamin inay sohnay phool la k deay ap ko tame wesay mil gaya tha Sab kamon se jo hamarey leay itna ......

wesay ye unghli Aapi ki pakri huwie ya shoti sis ki ;)

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thanks Niki and Gul-e-Tea......new baitbazi kab shoro kar rehi hain ap :)

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thanks chando g …me mish u :frowning:

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wah gr8 one nikami siso

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As usual, excellent and marvellous contribution... !

Keep it up and thanks for sharing :)

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ok pirh tajar raheiyei ga ap, hemat toh kar lei hei magrh ap restei mei marei gei toh nehei na :bummer: :grumpy:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

thanks Eastren ap ne hamin inay sohnay phool la k deay ap ko tame wesay mil gaya tha Sab kamon se jo hamarey leay itna ......


GREAT.... wasay for ur kind information.... jub bhi i get thora sa bhi time tu i do read poetry, but pata nahi y u said this :( , wasay i am not doing anything Imp nowdays......

wesay ye unghli Aapi ki pakri huwie ya shoti sis ki ;)


welll.... bahi choota ho ya baara, wo baara hee hoota hay :) Eastern Thoughs hain yeh.....right???? :)
aur iss picture main i tried to express UR poem in a picture, yeh 2 friends kahain ja raahay hain i think !

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