Kabhi ghar se nikal kar tum ne
sarma ki thitharti chandani shab main
akele chand ko dekha?
kabhi sunsan baghoon main
kisi tanha rawish per chalte chalte, chand se poocha
k wo tum se ziyada muztarib kiyun hai?
magar tum!
band kamre k makeen !
khwabon k shahzade!
nikal kar garm kamre se
kahan jao gaiye adhi raat ko sunsan baghon main?
akele chand se bateen tu wo mazloom karte hain
jinheen ghar k dar-o-dewar bhi
dhutkar dete hain
jinhaiyen apni hi awazoon k khanjar
maar dete hain!
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nehe me ne nehe dekah 
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Amazing sharing Ali..................:)
bohat koob
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Zabardast :k:
**Bohat khoob **
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thanks
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thanks for sharing.
best,
dushwari
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bohut khub 
n welcome to GupShup 
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Kabhi ghar se nikal kar tum ne
sarma ki thitharti chandani shab main akele chand ko dekha? kabhi sunsan baghoon main kisi tanha rawish per chalte chalte, chand se poocha k wo tum se ziyada muztarib kiyun hai?
magar tum!
band kamre k makeen ! khwabon k shahzade! nikal kar garm kamre se kahan jao gaiye adhi raat ko sunsan baghon main? akele chand se bateen tu wo mazloom karte hain jinheen ghar k dar-o-dewar bhi dhutkar dete hain jinhaiyen apni hi awazoon k khanjar maar dete hain!
Ghar se nikal k sunsan bagh main ja k and wo bhi iztrabi chand ko dekha wow khalal hai demagh ka ...poem tu good but kisi bechare ko insist kar k sunsan rat main bhaar bhejna not a good baat ....chand ko dekhne k liye roof top kafi :)
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nice sharing Ali and welcome here if U really new Ali :)
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Thanks for liking 
aray baba kuch panay ke liye kuch to karna hi parta hai na ab sunsaan raat main chand ko roof top se daikha to kaya daikha kisi sunsan bagh main chand ko daikhiye ga kabhi phir pata chalay ga na
thanks for liking
I am not new Ali ab to muddat ho gai hai aaye huway
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Thanks for liking :)
aray baba kuch panay ke liye kuch to karna hi parta hai na ab sunsaan raat main chand ko roof top se daikha to kaya daikha kisi sunsan bagh main chand ko daikhiye ga kabhi phir pata chalay ga na
thanks for liking
I am not new Ali :) ab to muddat ho gai hai aaye huway
mudat se aiey hain tu invisible keon they :D
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Its coool good,
Thanks for sharing such a great poem ...
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Ghar se nikal k sunsan bagh main ja k and wo bhi iztrabi chand ko dekha wow khalal hai demagh ka ...poem tu good but kisi bechare ko insist kar k sunsan rat main bhaar bhejna not a good baat ....chand ko dekhne k liye roof top kafi :)
Zalimoon Ali ko Appriciate karo, Begining mein itni achi sharing ki hay ...
Ali is new Baby-chicken. Be relax in comments, kahein becharay ka dil na toot jaiay or dar hay kay kahein bhaag hi na jaiay ... :)