Magar Tum Theek Kehtay Ho..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity July 9, 2007, 5:47pm 1

Fakhira Batool Ki Aik Buhat Khoobsurat Nazm, Mohabbat Se Mansoob Buhat Se Wahimay Samaitay Huay..

Jo Tum Ko Fone Uthanay Main Zara Takheer Hojaye
Tou Sach Much Main, Buhat Naraz Hoti Hoon
Main Shayad Darr Si Jaati Hoon
Hazaron Wehm Dil Main Ghar Banatay Hain
Kaheen Aisa Na Ho Jaye, Kaheen Wesa Na Ho Jaye
Mera Yeh Soch Ker He Dil Larazta Hai
Kaheen Tum Ghair Ki Baaton Main Gum Hoker
Meri Chahat Se He Daaman Chhura Bethay
Kaheen Mujh Ko Bhula Bethay
Tou Kia Hoga…?
Ager Aisa Hua To Ek Pal Bhi Jee Na Paon Gi
Tumharay Khuab Palkon Se Giray Tou Toot Jaon Gi
Tumhain Ger Fone Uthanay Main
Zara Takheer Ho Jaye
Tou Main Sach Much Buhat Naraz Hoti Hoon

Magar Iss Baat Se Saabit Hua Janaan..!
Mujhe Tum Se Muhabbat Hai, Muhabbat Hai, Muhabbat Hai..

Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

muncho July 9, 2007, 9:31pm 2

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kuch aur sabit ho na ho ye sabit hota k mohabut k liay phone hona zaroori hay ; thanx for sharing

redidentity July 10, 2007, 4:38am 3

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:D Yeh Modern Zamanay Ki Mohabbat Haina.. Kher Mohabbat To Mohabbat Hai.. Aap Yahan Telephone Ke Badlay Khat Bhi Use Ker Saktay Ho.. Aur Aise Ke Khat Ka Jawab Ager Buhat Din Tak Na Aye Tou....... :)

being_lonely July 10, 2007, 4:42am 4

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salamz n gudmorning Ahmer

yeah modren zamanay ki mohabat

Nice nazam it is :k:

redidentity July 10, 2007, 4:59am 5

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A Very Good Morning to You as Well SiD Jee n ..

Thank You for Appreciation..

tahreem_saeed July 10, 2007, 7:25am 6

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wow bohat sweet or simple words hain aaj kal tow CLI ka zamana hai may b wo no dekh k uthey he naa, kyunky ye aaj k zamney ke muhabbat hai anyways nice sharing Ahmer u always send nice poetry

redidentity July 10, 2007, 7:38am 7

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Thank You Tehreem.. :)

SJ July 10, 2007, 8:08am 8

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Bohat Khoob Logic Hai Mohabaat Honay Ka....................:)

redidentity July 10, 2007, 8:20am 9

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:) Theek Kaha..

mariam July 10, 2007, 8:52am 10

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nice sharing

:)

keep sharing .............

mariam July 10, 2007, 8:54am 11

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redidentity July 10, 2007, 9:03am 12

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Thanks Maryam.. :)

Amal July 10, 2007, 1:07pm 13

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Banda office meiN bhi to ho sakta hey na? Wo kya khoob kaha hey Faiz sahab ney: "Aur bhi dukh heiN zamaaney meiN mohabbat ke siwa" :~)

redidentity July 10, 2007, 3:35pm 14

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Amal Jee Wo bhi To Faiz Ne He Kaha Hai Ke Ager Ishq Aur Kaam Ko Sath Lekar Chalain To Dono Adhooray Chhornay Par Jatay Hain.. :$

EEMAAN July 10, 2007, 5:05pm 15

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Fakhra Batool hi ki aik telephonic nazam

Happy Birth Day-Aleesha

redidentity July 10, 2007, 5:11pm 16

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Thank You Emaan.. for Such Beautiful Contribution..

Abb Mujhe Bata Do Aap Ke Image Kese Attach hota hai

EEMAAN July 10, 2007, 5:14pm 17

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Jee zaroor,,,pehlay image ko save ker layin ,,,phir gs k right corner per image upload ki option hai ,,,us say attach ker layin..
And yea thanks for liking the poem..

redidentity July 10, 2007, 5:16pm 18

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Thank You For Briefing :$

So Nice of You :)

EEMAAN July 10, 2007, 5:18pm 19

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You are welcome :-)

redidentity July 12, 2007, 4:59am 20

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:)