magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

NikamiJano · December 1, 2002, 4:11pm

ye tooti huwi sansaiN ye haraf haRaf khya’aal
maiN soochta hooN k is baaR kis k naam karooN?

taraashtaY haiN sabi zakham apnaY apnaY-----sakhuN!
kisaY sakoot pe kaaRhoN kisaY kalam karooN

hazaR shakal ubhaRti hai teRi yaad k sath!
kisaY mata-e-safaR kis ko husan-e-shaam kaRooN

baghawatooN pe uteR aieN khawaisheN meRi
kisaY ree’haaie dooN kis ko aseer-e-daam kaRooN

tujhay tu kheR sanwaRnay ko aienaY haiN bohat
magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

HeArT_HaCKeR · December 1, 2002, 4:21pm

Bhoot achi hai nikami :)
thx 4 sharin

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 1, 2002, 5:59pm

nikamije merei barei bhe sochei nah koch

arifnawaz1 · December 1, 2002, 7:22pm

NJ… :k: :k: :k: as always !!!

chand_chehra · December 1, 2002, 7:47pm

Re: magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

very nice :k:

Jaan_Lewaa · December 1, 2002, 8:49pm

bhut khoob:k:

Gemini_the_Great · December 1, 2002, 10:00pm

Re: magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

beautiful :k:

missing… “written by :dill se”

nikii · December 1, 2002, 11:18pm

bhut khouubbbb :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 1, 2002, 11:32pm

Re: magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

beautiful:k::k:

Lamhay · December 2, 2002, 5:23am

wonderful Nikami thanks 4 sharing

SunnyBoy · December 2, 2002, 9:17am

Buhat Khoob

Pramod · December 2, 2002, 6:55pm

tujhay tu kheR sanwaRnay ko aienaY haiN bohat
magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

bahot hi achha sher hai , bahna.
thanks for sharing.

NikamiJano · December 3, 2002, 3:22am

aray mashoom g ap k leay he tu likhi ap tu kahti k har waqat roany dhonay wali aur jab likh rehi thei suchi se i thought about u

NikamiJano · December 3, 2002, 3:26am

Re: Re: magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

hmmm u sure u have that thingy called “Dil”

me misihing u too.."written by hathon se "

was thinking to call u this weekend but …bz bz

btw thanks and welcome back

NikamiJano · December 3, 2002, 3:28am

thanks chando g..nikii sis..lamhay sis....arif nawaz..HH..SB..gazal kisi ki..jaan lawa and Pra g..:)

ARSH · December 3, 2002, 2:39pm

bohat khoooooooob…:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · December 3, 2002, 6:32pm

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nikamijeee:kiss: mughei patah tha ap merei barei he soching:p:blush:

NikamiJano · December 4, 2002, 7:50pm

but ap keon roing na…:french:

NikamiJano · December 4, 2002, 7:57pm

thanks

Capricorn · December 4, 2002, 8:06pm

Re: magaR maiN apni gazal kis taRah tumam kaRooN

Beautiful :k: